We don't want to live for an eternity, we don't want to fight for an eternity, but we must. It is our calling, our curse. Our path and our duty to fight to protect those that are in need. We have slept for so long, and it is just the last o
Nice to see another chapter of this story. Glad to see Twilight start first contact. I wonder if Pinkie would have a relationship with the Tenho like in the original version or if Twilight would try her luck with him.
I feel really bad when I saw how far apart the chapters were... All those updates that changed Warframe, all when you're trying to write a chapter. Good work with it. And after acquiring Frost Prime, I still want to make a Warframe story.
'Man I gotta take time out of my day to fix his matrix...that thing is gonna breakdown completely one of these days and start talking to me in ways I never thought possible...I hope it doesn't suck out all the air in the Orbiter with me still in it...'
This chapter went out long before the War Within update... Are you psychic ?
Also, i know that this fic happen just after the Second Dream, but will more recent quests will make an appearance later ?
"Well, I guess I will just speak the truth to them, 'an unidentifiable flying object crashed into your old castle', I am sure that they not be mad at us for this seeing how it was out of our hands in the first place."
unidentified, not unidentifiable
If we can blow up his Balor Fomorians, destroy his Terra Frame, and kick his ass across several planets what hope does he have in stopping the Tenno? The correct answer is never.
Actually, that is the incorrect answer. The correct answer is "none." The question was about what kind of hope he has of stopping the Tenno, not when he will be able to stop the Tenno.
Sorry to say this, but you have rather poor sentence structure. The biggest problem is that you often either use commas were there should be periods or just don't any punctuation at all.
Nice to see another chapter of this story. Glad to see Twilight start first contact. I wonder if Pinkie would have a relationship with the Tenho like in the original version or if Twilight would try her luck with him.
That's life and no worries on the chapter length, from what I've seen 3-4 thousand words is considered the average.
I feel really bad when I saw how far apart the chapters were... All those updates that changed Warframe, all when you're trying to write a chapter. Good work with it. And after acquiring Frost Prime, I still want to make a Warframe story.
Perhaps a cross over?
Fun chapter as always. I'm kinda curious as to what level of anthro you have your ponies at.
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7438404 they still have horns and he said they look humanoidesque so I would think level 4 on the scale.
As long as this story gets updated im fine
You still when with 'I can't understand what your saying' bit?
7438853 Yes because when you encounter an alien race you obviously know their language by heart.
7438404 7438503 It is pretty much between 4 and 3
7438938 thanks dood
7438938 Now that I think about it, I think you said that at one point in the previous version, but I could be wrong.
I'm liking this so far, tracking to see where this goes
this is interesting, looking forward to the next chapter
Yay a new chapter
Oooh, yes this is better than the original.
This chapter went out long before the War Within update... Are you psychic ?
Also, i know that this fic happen just after the Second Dream, but will more recent quests will make an appearance later ?
unidentified, not unidentifiable
Actually, that is the incorrect answer. The correct answer is "none." The question was about what kind of hope he has of stopping the Tenno, not when he will be able to stop the Tenno.
Sorry to say this, but you have rather poor sentence structure. The biggest problem is that you often either use commas were there should be periods or just don't any punctuation at all.