A few days following Pinkie's birthday, she gets a surprise present in the mail. What could it possibly be?
I love Disney, reading, writing, and of course, PONIES! As an English major I hope to improve in my writing skills and can't wait to publish. In the meantime, I will be happy just to read what's here.
A few days following Pinkie's birthday, she gets a surprise present in the mail. What could it possibly be?
nice Phineas and Ferb reference. also nice story. well done.
I like this; this is cute. Let's get this added to a few more groups, see if we can get it noticed a little bit more. This group, for instance:
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This was adorable! Great reference!
Cute story, well done!
This is a good story. It deserves more views.
Well now, that was cute. Tiny little gummy.
Piece of advice though: drop the weather report at the start.
I have nothing really to say that hasn't already been said. Well, I spotted a couple small spelling errors; a quick once-over should take care of that. I wouldn't worry too much about it, though, for it doesn't really harm or derail the story. Four Shattered Skulls out of Five.
This right here is just cute.
THIS WAS SO DANG CUTE. Seriously, I really enjoy stories that give background to what's already in canon. I love this take on how Pinkie got Gummy.
Heh! Or Neigh Orleans! Pony town names are so fun to imagine.
This is really cute, though! I never would have thought of a fic to show how Pinkie winds up getting Gummy as a pet. Very thoughtful and well done! I may just borrow that idea for some of my own work sometime; Pinkie getting Gummy either from a friend in another town, or by visiting it herself. He reminds me so much of Totodile from that one episode of Pokemon where the gang visited New Bark Town.