As a changeling, Lumi's life was simple: go to work, train a new changeling, and meet a new human to feed on. However, mysterious changelings deaths have her investigating to keep the peace between species. Set in the Gentlemanverse
Forgive me if this has ben said before and I've just forgotten, but...are humans involved in the changeling deaths? Maybe they've started...I dunno, using blood tests, x-rays, or some other human tech to discover changelings?
3537087 Don't look at me like that, Pinkie. Derped eyes strain your ocular musculature.
Now for realz: you have that rare skill of painting any situation a grim color and still making it fit the story nicely. And going by the synopsis, that's bound to happen sooner or later.
Hey Lumi, you see that light at the end of the tunnel? Is that a just a train or is it Shining Armor seeking out the "lover" who "jilted" him and who you are beholden to?
Canterlot's getting involved huh. I'd feel more sorry for Lumi getting stuck in all the crap that's about to go down, but her attitude toward interspecies friends is getting in the way. But the character development possibilities? I'm freaking AMPED!
That is, if Lumi is related to Shining as you believe she is.
That's not what I meant at all...
All I was saying is that if Canterlot is getting involved then Shiny may be as well since he's probably on the lookout for Chrysalis after what she did to him. If Lumi's getting involved, then I expect a run-in with Shiny at some point, which is going to be a scary thing for her since she's part of Chrysalis' "hive" and Shiny would be very interested in asking her some questions about the queen.
This is the problem with spy work. Every spy works under the shadow of something much bigger and much meaner than they are. The problem is, the moment that big angry something realizes there is a problem, the timer starts to tick. Not just for the person who got caught (who may or may not already be dead) but for everyone who was even marginally connected to the compromised spy.
That said, it seems to me that a dead changeling is bound to attract attention not just in the local area, but likely throughout the nation given historic events. Guards who are normally on low alert will start looking more for abnormal behavior, and counter-intelligence will start sifting through a greater number of files to find connections. The implication of capital involvement is almost a surefire sign of national high alert. Because of this, I suspect the newly trained Silverfly is about to have a few new tests coming her way. Most of it will likely involve better blending in, but what about her records that lack deep cover?
I look forward to the continued development of this story -Jansvl
i know its a day after and all but... MERRY CHRIST MARRY CHRIST HAPPY MAS It's okay, i talked to jesus's parents and everrything. He's such a nice boy two kids no college if no education whip in one hand and jesus's dick in the other i win
i know its a day after and all but... MERRY CHRIST MARRY CHRIST HAPPY MAS It's okay, i talked to jesus's parents and everrything. He's such a nice boy two kids no college if no education whip in one hand and jesus's dick in the other i win
3540621 Synopsis of the story? Oh, now I'm curious... if you don't want to share publicly, pm me? I would love to see what you've come up with, especially if it's even half as good as this story is.
Bradley's current book is about a human detective hired by local law enforcers of an Equestrian city to investigate a case.
Synopsis:
James Keel was running out of options. A detective who specialized in missing items and theft cases, how was he suddenly embroiled with a murder case involving the Graham crime family? Fortunately, when he is asked by Equestria to consult on a case, he was more than happy to oblige.
His case? To catch the greatest thief of Equestria, Shadowmare. Silent for all these years, she suddenly causes a commotion when she challenged the local law enforcement in a game where she would steal Celestia's Crown.
This wasn't a typical case for him. He was in a new location, with alien locals that didn't fully trust him, and against a mysterious thief who had kept herself free, leaving little to no clues behind. Fortunately, he meets up with a earth pony, Misty Trail, who is surprisingly helpful in adjusting culturally to Equestria.
Meanwhile, Shadowmare, who had been retired for years, is surprised when her name was used in a crime that was about to be committed. Aware that claiming innocence will not help her in anyway, she provides assistance to the rather surprisingly sharp human detective who was hired out to catch her.
Ah things are starting to get interesting.
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XD After six chapters, it ought to be.
As always, I eagerly await more.
Evil cat!
If they think this is bad, wait until more bugs start being turned into worm food.
O`BOY!
feathered heart ez soon
*edit
*reads blog post*
HOLY BUTTSTABBER,YOU NEED A MUSE!
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It may take a while, with FH being difficult, but I'll get working on it soon.
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That was awesome.
Forgive me if this has ben said before and I've just forgotten, but...are humans involved in the changeling deaths? Maybe they've started...I dunno, using blood tests, x-rays, or some other human tech to discover changelings?
3537087 Don't look at me like that, Pinkie. Derped eyes strain your ocular musculature.
Now for realz: you have that rare skill of painting any situation a grim color and still making it fit the story nicely. And going by the synopsis, that's bound to happen sooner or later.
3536819 Okay...but, please tell me if you do, okay?
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Not mentioned, and because of spoilers, won't mention. XD Sorry.
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Thanks. Just fair warning... I never made a mystery/thriller story before, so, we'll see how it goes.
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No problem.
the sequel to this will probably be about changelings escaping to earth.
cookies are a way of life
Heh...changelings and fax machines.
I'm calling it now, the bad guys in Bradley's book will be Changelings. It would be incredibly ironic.
Hey Lumi, you see that light at the end of the tunnel? Is that a just a train or is it Shining Armor seeking out the "lover" who "jilted" him and who you are beholden to?
Canterlot's getting involved huh. I'd feel more sorry for Lumi getting stuck in all the crap that's about to go down, but her attitude toward interspecies friends is getting in the way. But the character development possibilities? I'm freaking AMPED!
I bet the changelings are being killed by humans
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lol, way too early to be even thinking of sequel.
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I'm kinda curious on what made you say that.
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Yeah. Of all the things Mantid gets curious about, eh?
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Not exactly. I can give you the synopsis. I actually think it's a viable story on its own.
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You'd have to wonder who's more angry if they do know that he's got a daughter: the wife, or the father.
That is, if Lumi is related to Shining as you believe she is.
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Can't say.
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That's not what I meant at all...
All I was saying is that if Canterlot is getting involved then Shiny may be as well since he's probably on the lookout for Chrysalis after what she did to him. If Lumi's getting involved, then I expect a run-in with Shiny at some point, which is going to be a scary thing for her since she's part of Chrysalis' "hive" and Shiny would be very interested in asking her some questions about the queen.
But if she happens to be his daughter...
dun Dun DUNNNNNNnnnnnnn...!
(Thanks for that, btw )
This is the problem with spy work. Every spy works under the shadow of something much bigger and much meaner than they are. The problem is, the moment that big angry something realizes there is a problem, the timer starts to tick. Not just for the person who got caught (who may or may not already be dead) but for everyone who was even marginally connected to the compromised spy.
That said, it seems to me that a dead changeling is bound to attract attention not just in the local area, but likely throughout the nation given historic events. Guards who are normally on low alert will start looking more for abnormal behavior, and counter-intelligence will start sifting through a greater number of files to find connections. The implication of capital involvement is almost a surefire sign of national high alert. Because of this, I suspect the newly trained Silverfly is about to have a few new tests coming her way. Most of it will likely involve better blending in, but what about her records that lack deep cover?
I look forward to the continued development of this story
-Jansvl
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It's the CIA and Mabey M16.
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better yet,killed by that fat fuck from the beginning
3540621 JEEZUS QUITE THE COMMENT LINEUP YOU GOT THERE
i know its a day after and all but...
MERRY CHRIST
MARRY CHRIST
HAPPY MAS
It's okay, i talked to jesus's parents and everrything. He's such a nice boy
two kids
no college if no education
whip in one hand and jesus's dick in the other
i
win
i know its a day after and all but...
MERRY CHRIST
MARRY CHRIST
HAPPY MAS
It's okay, i talked to jesus's parents and everrything. He's such a nice boy
two kids
no college if no education
whip in one hand and jesus's dick in the other
i
win
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Synopsis of the story? Oh, now I'm curious... if you don't want to share publicly, pm me? I would love to see what you've come up with, especially if it's even half as good as this story is.
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Bradley's current book is about a human detective hired by local law enforcers of an Equestrian city to investigate a case.
Synopsis:
That's what I got so far.
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Oh wow.... That does sound like a great setup! Hell, if that was the jacket for a book, I would so buy it. I love those kinds of novels.
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3706471 Sounds fucking epic. (And a tad reminiscent of one of the Pink Panther movies )
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3539061 IT'S MURDER-SASSINS!!
Alright, read up to chapter 6 so far and I'm really intrigued. A spy fanfic with Changelings in the GFM 'verse! My joy is overflowing!
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that better becomes a story !
also why are changelings not changing into stallions ? that would solve the love problem very quick ^.^
6093109 my guess is because they take a chance on getting caught, if i remember right they have away to look for changling magics