Cool, glad to see it's up!

Hurray! Time to read!

Time to sit my ass down and read.

And I'm hooked.

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^_^ Yeah. Did a few last minute changes as well. Thoughts, guys?

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Haha. Glad you are.

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Haven't read it yet, not like I was going to do any homework today anyway.

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XD Take your time.

This is gonna be fun on the bun.

(Shall read and say more torrmow, have to go to bed for work. It's 11 pm.)

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I'll await your comment then.

First chapter, bam, instafave. Now to read it again so I catch all the details.

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At least now you have the context... or at leas the beginning. Although honestly, should have given you all the drafts when I recruited you. I don't know. Maybe I wanted to keep it as a surprise as long as possible.

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You were waiting for this? I didn't know. ^_^;;

Croach, huh? Nice Codex Alera reference. Hopefully your changelings aren't as destructive as the Vord, eh?

Pretty impressive so far, DEL. Good establishment of the main character, AND an excellent bit of worldbuilding for the Gentlemanverse as well. At no point did I get the impression that I was being told a story, it was very immersive, but I learned a lot about the Gentlemanverse changlings and how the operate.

I am looking forward to more.

I am curious about something though... is the title misspelled, or is that a reference to something I am missing at the moment?

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Roun is an old English word.

roun
Web definitions
a secret or mystery; writing; rumour, speech, advice; a whisper; to whisper.
en.wiktionary.org/wiki/roun

Credit to Permanent Temporary

Oh yeah, going to give you a PM.

Interested in where this will lead...i shall see

nice.
that is all

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Hope I'm really, really up to it.

Whoo! Featured!

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Okay, I'm going to sigh in relief. You guys liked it.

Readin' tiem.

3287624 what is there not to like?

3287624 *Lifts really big stick.
This had better not make your updates on your other stories fall behind (ie. Genteleman for Mares)

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Give me your thoughts later?

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No idea, honestly. New story, new characters, there's always a chance that not a lot will like it. As for 3287645, Gentleman for Mares is a finished story. Its sequel, I will work on once Feathered Heart or Changeling Roun is finished.

3287650 I know that it is finished. i was just refering to it because i dont know the title of the sequel
P.S. i live in the woods. there is no shortage of really big sticks to brandish at authors.
*rips up a tree

3287557 Eh, you gave me the choice, I took it. Frankly just what you'd given me was a good start. This just adds more meat to it.

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Always thought you went to the femur bones.

Working title is Gentleman and his Mare. And this story is actually connected to GFM.

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Ah. When I get the next draft ready, I'll invite you in again.

My wings receded from view before five stars, arranged into an oval shape, appeared on my flanks.

Why do I get the feeling I've seen her somewhere before

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Its not the same pony, though

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I figured as much since that would throw the chronology between G4M, FH, and this one into weird and wacky territory.

Oh well, it was a fun thought to think.

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Changeling Roun is actually set probably a chapter or two before the end of GFM. Timeline will be established soon.

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Enjoy.

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That still puts Harry's training well before Lumi's discovery of the joy of humans (and in the wrong city).

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I think it was five years ago when I first heard about the discovery, when a portal connecting our world to theirs was created by accident.

This one establishes the timeline. So far. XD If I can spot any errors in GFM, I'll correct it.

Color me interested. Good world-building on top of GFM, especially where changeling life/habits/society are concerned. I'm interested in finding out what her next move is. Also, daughter of Chrysalis? (unless that's "mother" in the metaphorical sense) I wanna hear more of this.

Will we be seeing any cameos from other characters from GFM?

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Also, daughter of Chrysalis? (unless that's "mother" in the metaphorical sense) I wanna hear more of this.

Can't comment on this yet. ^_^

Will we be seeing any cameos from other characters from GFM?

Yes.

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Sweet.

Wait a tick... father was a unicorn... mother was Chrysalis...

Uh...

Naw... no... no way... the timelines don't match up... do they? She'd have to be a little filly... I would think...

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No comment.

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I guess that now makes two of us who are eagerly awaiting a Gentleman-verse timeline.

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Season 2 MLP:FIM was maybe ten years (or more) before Twilight's little accidental discovery.

Make what you will.

EDIT: Of course, that can change. ^_^

I really want to see this. I want to see more of this world.

Also, Croach, nice.

Anyways, the pacing seems alright, the characters seem fine, and the story is intriguing. More review as more chapters arrive.

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Word of God: Yes, they care for him. I told my pre-reader this one time: Emotions are emotions. I'll explore more of this, and show why Changelings have an odd sense of morality in the coming chapters, yet not completely alien at the same time.

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^_^ Alright. Working on it.

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Thanks.

Demon Eyes Laharl posted a new Story...
darn...
*looks at watch* 02:00am ...
... I'm not sure if I should love or hate you for that...

... need to read...

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You can save it for tomorrow, dude. The story ain't going anywhere.

I like this.

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Glad you did.

This looks interesting! Adding to read later, then favorite possibly :D

This looks pretty interesting so far. I'm gonna keep an eye on this.

Demon Eyes Laharl fic, better read it.

Naturally I had to favorite this. It's not like it was going to be a question.

I am wondering about something though. What exactly have the ponies told the humans about changelings? You'd think that creatures with the capabilities of changelings would set off every danger sense humans had. Unless, maybe, the ponies know more about the changelings' numbers and activities than the changelings think they do (the ponies letting the changelings go about their business as long as they don't step out of line again) and have shown the humans that the situation is under wraps.

Is it bad of me to have abandoned "Gentlemen for Mares" for "Feathered Hearts" and to be reluctant to read this one because of that?