Scootaloo knows when somepony is hiding something and the new colt at school is no exception. He's been there for a week and nopony knows anything about him. Not even his name. She is determined to uncover the truth, but what if discovering the truth could end in tragedy? OR will not finding out end the same way?
Sorry but I'm terrible at descriptions and this is the best I can come up with. This is the first story I'm putting up so comment brutally. Enjoy!
nice story. just a few punctuation errors, but overall a good story. Also I am looking forward to reading the story. I have noticed in stories like these there is always a sad magic about them.As a first time author I don't usually read stories but you have caught my attention, and that is very rare. I applaud you.
*favorites* I can't wait for more! :D
good story im very intrested to see what will happen
good job so far...cant wait to read what happens
Good story! Can't wait to read more!
I like were this story is going
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Thanks, that means alot!
hmm i like the story wondering if we will see scootabuse in this
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Scootabuse...Hmmm. Maybe, Maybe not.
hey the DUN DUNNNNN DUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN thing is mine take it back copier
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Can't I have permission to use it for this one story...PLEASE!
4404331 Ok fine But ONLY for THIS Story
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Phew, I thought for a moment there I was gonna have to do something desperate to convince you like show you the unfinshed next chapter or somthing crazy like that
4406158 GOD ******* I COULD HAVE SEEN THE NXT CHAPTER
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Well you will...eventually,
4575403 so its been long ass time and no new chapter
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Except the new I posted back in June. If it is to chapter 4 you are referring then I agree. Sadly that is still in the works as I hope to have both 4 and 5 done and post both within a few days of each other as something of an apology for the time it's taken to get the words together
6404642 don't be dead
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Its not dead. I promise.
6531255 thank god you not deader than disco
I'm calling it. His parents beat him
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...maybe.