After Spike and Twilight hold a heated argument between each other, Spike is uninvited to Twilight's Birthday Party. With an almost immaculate friendship between the two on the brink of destruction, how will Spike cope with his choices, how will he make up for it, and how does Twilight and her friends think about the argument she delved into?
(This story takes place during and after the events of Sweet and Elite.)
Any comments and criticism is greatly appreciated.
(If anyone knows the image source, I'd appreciate it if you know what it is.)
Chapters (1)
251201 Thanks.
251222 Anytime bro
Nice one here. Though I have to ask how come Rarity didn't hear about this? I expected her to be there as well.
when i saw "hooves around his body"
i was like
REALLY!!??
YOUR GONNA MAKER HER N HIM
-sees the rest-
Oh...your lucky
Faved
I liked this story. it was a good quick-read and seemed pretty cannon (except for the tickling part, but that may just be my filthy mind at work). Favourite'd, Thumbs-up'd.
D'awwwwwwwwww
Me likey.
d'awwww
Awwwww that's so sweet( and not elite)
Darn it, Spike doesn't see Twilight as a mother. Aside from the master/servant relationship they have at times they pretty much speak/treat one another like equals (something not possible in a mother/son relationship).
I felt that in the early half Spike was suffering a bit too much, but I felt a little better by the end.
251244 She stayed in Canterlot at the end of Sweet and Elite, if I remember correctly.
253505 Well, I'm not a great writer, so there may be a few character breaking moments.
251259 No, you pervy!
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
And that sums up this story!
254887 Well I sort of expected her to hear about Spike not being there, and that she give her own two bits on the whole fight thing.
255026 Well, as I said in the story, Twilight said she had an argument on the chariot home, and not when she was at Canterlot. Since Rarity stayed at Canterlot for the night, she wouldn't have known about it. I could've added in a bit where someone voiced for her opinion since she wasn't on the chariot, but ah well, what's done is done.
255031 Fair enough I guess. Not a bad fic overall, and it is a good explanation as to why Spike wasn't at Twilight's party.
Oh yeah! Spike wasn't at Twilight's party! Why is that? I'm just gonna say this happened.
Countsmegula
Epic work bro, love the story :)
Seem to have something in my eye..
*sniff sniff* why does it have to end in tears
"It was so beautiful." - Zanguief
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Very nice, sweet slice of life story.
Of course, Spike does have a point, given that Sweet and Elite does take place very shortly after Lesson Zero anyways.
Yeah his fault my ass.