Sarah was living a normal life, until the outbreak. She was one of the many to die that night, although not from the infection but from an uninfected solider who was just following orders. Everyone thought she was gone forever, until a certain god of chaos took pity on Sarah and brought her to a land that she never knew existed
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Two things...
1)Get someone to read through this, there are grammar issue that need to be fixed.
2) You will probably need to explain how Discord is able to interact outside of the Statue
I see potential
This could be interesting...continue
*clicks on stories reads both chapters* you had my curiosity now you have my attention continue
Dude. This is ok, but don't rush it. Slow down, and take your time.
hmmmm... can't wait until she tells about the zombies... spike would love to hear that...
3440335 A janitor probably stubbed his toe or something equally as chaotic...
There is potential, but it needs some editing. Possibly making it a little longer.
please make more sarah and fluttershy are my favorite because they both love wolves
okay, i actually like this... im not a fan of crossovers either. i shall favorite this and see where its gonna go.
slow down a bit, but yes, this is quite good
so what zombie game is this based on? ( I know I should just read yet I would like too know
)
ok, I'll bite
3445324 The Last of Us. It's a good game. Sarah died in the prologue.
Not bad at all… It just needs a bit of padding and there are some missing words here and there but dam it the concept alone didn't make me click on it fast.
not bad... I see potential...
It's not bad, but you have some trouble capitalizing I's, the story's pace is a bit too fast, dialouge could use some work, and you should go into detail more.
a god of chaos? let's scream AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAHHAHHHAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH pant pant pant AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
AHOOOOOOOOO where luna in the next chapter
3455251 yea someone likes screaming!
not bad...
dude I will proofread if you write a new chap
Moar. Now. Please?
So, when is the next chapter coming out?
*Pokes repeatedly with a stick*
Is this. .. is this dead?
please do more
sarah if i was you i wouldnt go bact to the world apocalypse of fungus zombies
5632995 Maybe?
6924592 author hasn't been on the site for 64 weeks now ....
6927062 Post this in the Revive Dead Fanfics folder
More. Please?
great story keep it up