When a team of teenage mercenaries began looking for a Organoid, in ancient Zoidian ruins they inadvertently trigger a piece of ancient tech that brings them as well as their zoids to a land that is unkown to them. There they meet the native population, and the pilots must find a way to broker a peace between the natives and the other inhabitants of planet Zi.
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LOVE IT!!!!
I will just say this. I have IMMENSE hope for this fic. I sincerely hope that you make it actually work. I'm watching you.
THE FIRST ANIME I EVER WATCHED AS A KID IN MLP!!!!!!!
I LOVE YOU
2872599 Thanks I just finished watching guardian force, and I gotta say, not a fan of New century Zero
well, after seeing more of ur work, id say its worth a like, but u need to find urself an editor, ur comma use is completely out of wack, ur wording can be clumsy as times and up to this point, several ponies have acted OOC...
have you watched Zoids Genesis? good ideas for new zoids
not mine but still a good example of non cannon right here
AAAAAAAAANNNNNNDDDD shit hit the fan sooner than i thoge, this is why kids are better at making 1st contic they don't freak out that mech, hell Applebloom did a great job with the zebor why not with humans.
Hell i'll tell all my frds that been looking for a fic like this for mothes, if you can make her 1up her sister ten times over with the 1st contic thing.
Oh and the Diamond Dogs will get there ass handed to them for sure ten times over times two.
Hell even i can see how this is just going to end if someone with a brain can think for once.
HAHAHAHAHA I KNOW IT!
but anyway i woder how this will end them finding out that it was her frd and her that start the war becasue there rachs fucks, or just the humans taking over there land, and have ziods battle for fun like in the show.
Oh boy if they go into battle they will lose for sure, i mean what odds they can fight with battle hard warrios that fight just for fun where the ponys look like they never been at war?????????
I mean hell if my great great great garpoa was there he would have been shoting him self mumble times in the hand with a sling........
i mean it the six ponies was the 1st one to acttack and not to mentoc the humans did noting woger
have to admit that this is an interesting story, think ill be faving it, u perked my interest..
i love it still and i would like it if she did got knocked up, hey that what happen when you don't use a condom
will there go the Zebra lands now there fucked over ten times over now
great, the Zebra r the equivalent of Wakanda, and they found a ultra powerful Zoid and want to take over the world...
shut up already!
3342538 Not sure if complement, or insult
3344271 ment as a compliment, really...
3344348 alright, i will take your word on it
yup none of this will happen if there where not all raceist
i little anti climatic for a final battle...
3370455 Not really all that good at fight scenes, but i am getting better
3370457 i can see ur not very good at them, especially since from what ive been able to look up about the Death Saurer, that continuous barrage from the smaller Zoids shouldnt have been able to even scratch the paint on it, even with the Elements thrown in, and btw, just WHERE did the Mane 6 get the Elements after just escaping from a PRISON opperated by Zebras who must have been well aware of what the Elements ARE and therefore would have taken them AWAY if the Mane 6 already had them. (plot hole FTW...) u can see y i would call this final battle anti climatic. every other time a Death Saurar has shown up in Zoids, its been a PITA to take down, this battle was too short and too easy...not very much of a Doomsday device...like the Zebra thought it would be...if a smattering of medium to large Zoids could take it down in just TWO VOLLEYS along with the Elements of Harmony...
3371399 well, if the deathsaucer had just reawakened, it would be weak, and plus i was really tired writing this chapter
Van is gonna get dragged into this!
About time Van showed up!