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Moon_Skritch
Names Moon Skritch, On a permanent hiatus, I don't think I'll come back. Feel free to read what I have! Thanks for being a good community years ago.
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Yes. Wonderful!
I like it. It had an air of mystery throughout the story, only for all to be explained and lost at the end.
Fav'd.
awesome
We nuked ourselves?
We are a toopid race.
Eh... I can't decide if I like this fic or not.
A little rushed but pretty good still.
not what i wanted to read. 4/10
3211726 Then why'd you click on it?
3220994 I've read stories like this before that were done a lot better in my opinion.
But don't be disheartened!
This is only my opinion of your story and if other people like it, then you should be proud of your work. 
3221288 Eh to be honest. I don't really like this story either. It didnt turn out how I wanted. Its just this story idea was burning into my brain and if I didnt write it. I'd probably go insane.
I just wanted this story done.
3221611 Well can I give a few head pointers? You might find them useful in future works.
3221695 Sure! Thank you! I love tips. I feel I am not that good at writing at all.
3221699 kk well first thing. the story's plot is somewhat generic considering i've read stories like this before. what you could have done to make it better was putting more work into when the human race destroyed itself.
Add a family in the explosions.
The fact that the only humans the mane6 saw were soldiers made their reaction a little uncalled for. YES they should have cried but the reader is a human and we see people die in war all the time.
Add a little girl holding a stuffed doll. That would probably get me. 
3221719 I didn't think of that. Huh. Also like I said, I am not too good at this.. :/
3221730 practice makes perfect my friend.
Find ways to pull the strings in the human mind. We all think the same. Might be hard at first but gets easier as it goes. Take this fic for example. The author made the main human protagonist in such a way that we wanted to connect to him. He also made it look natural so we wouldn't get bored reading it. 
3221754 Thanks for the help.
3221771 Don't mention it.