Hide and Seek

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Applejack plays hide and seek with two very special ponies. Unfortunately for this filly, they're very good hiders.

Cover art by PrincessSilverGlow on DeviantArt.

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asdfghjklsemicolon

asdfghjklsemicolon #1 · Aug 14th, 2013 · 2 · ·

Wow! Beautifully well written and heartfelt! All stories about Applejack get my attention right of the bat, and this one really blasted through my expectations. It was short, sweet, and sad.
5/5 mustaches

Diablomuerte2

Diablomuerte2 #2 · Aug 14th, 2013 · · ·

I liked it just the feels cannon was on high setting.

Also I always wondered about the Ah or I when Applejack dialogue. Sometimes Ah sounds better sometimes I sounds better. What made you decide to use Ah?

appledash348

appledash348 #3 · Aug 14th, 2013 · · ·

sosaidon sec

ponypokeperson

ponypokeperson #4 · Aug 14th, 2013 · · ·

i this fanfic plz make more

IsabellaAmoreSirenix

IsabellaAmoreSirenix #5 · Aug 14th, 2013 · · ·

Oh Celestia... you guys have no idea of the amazing rush I felt when I first saw four favorites in my inbox. I didn't plan on actually posting this because I thought the descriptions were too weak and the narrative too predictable and contrived. So glad I did!

3042321 I've been confused about that as well. In fact, at first thought I was least likely to write about AJ because I didn't want to deal with trying to figure out her accent and mannerisms. I don't live in the South, and my attempts at a Southern accent are downright abysmal, but at the same time, I wanted to make sure everyone sounded authentic. Plus, there were only three lines of dialogue, so Ah was basically the only place where I could show an accent. If given more dialogue, I probably would have used I, but included terms such as mah or ain't, but neither of those opportunities arose. So basically, those Ah's were a non-Southerner shouting, "This pony is a Southerner, and I am going to make you believe she is a Southerner!"

3042669 Aww, thanks! I'm afraid this is only a one-shot (not much more I can really do with this idea). I'm currently working on a trilogy on another fandom, so I don't think I'll write too much on here for the next couple months, but once that's over (I project it to be done around January or February of 2014), I intend on switching to MLP full time. Hopefully I'll finally be able to write that Applebloom fanfic about the finer workings of Equestrian culture in regards to the concepts of self-discovery and self-identity that's been in the back of my mind for months before it rots away.

Diablomuerte2

Diablomuerte2 #6 · Aug 14th, 2013 · · ·

3042936 Take that favorite I just threw your way and enjoy it. Also I get it but for me personally I can't decide whether to do ah or I and I tried both for me I works I just have to countrify( my own word) her other dialogue bits. Like use Landsakes or something cause AJ is the worst to write for.

You did a good job doing so :)