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Tired always.

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Kid did it. Pulled it off. Set everything back to normal. Restored the world.

Sometimes I think we lost just as much then as we did when the calamity hit.

Kid spent the rest of his second term on the rippling walls, his old friend by his side the entire time. The hammer was always the strength behind the kid's words, but the kid couldn't call it his best friend anymore. Felt it would be wrong. A memoir from the Bastion. But that was far from the only thing that it let him keep.

He was in Caelondia proper when he saw her. And she returned his gaze. They knew each other, somehow. So they met again, for the first time. Zia had been able to overcome the betrayal eventually, but it still stung her, still hurt her to talk about it. Somethings ain't gonna go away with time, somethings need a special kind of care.

She introduced him to her father, Venn, a genius, nervous fellow. But the kid's eye was caught by the man's friend. An older fellow with pure white hair a lot like his own, and they shared a moment in remembrance of an unlived life. This time, they introduced themselves the first time they met. Rucks.

It felt... complete. Almost.

They were missing someone.

The name eluded them, but they remembered their past in blurry colors, and their were some colors that were very easy to recall.

That day, before they went to their homes, Zia offered a prayer. She asked for guidance and truth. She asked for help for the weary. And she asked for peace for her friend, that no matter where he was he would have a chance to redeem himself. He deserved at least that much.

I can't say much for the first two parts of that prayer, but the third part came true. Hope Zulf keeps himself together in this new world.

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Comments ( 14 )

Huh, a Bastion/MLP:FiM crossover, with Zulf as the lead?

Will fav and upvote. Must say you did a decent job of Rucks, even if you feel 'meh' about it.

Can I merry you a thousand times? I don't usually approve of crossovers, but bastion is simply amazing, and you did a fantastic job paying homage to it. Sorry, I normally don't fangasm.

The wording and such is kind of confusing and hard to follow.

At the end I started to lose it but before that I managed to read it with his voice so I guess it's mostly a success.

A great chapter as expected.Keep it up.

Please please PLEASE continue this story!

I understand it isn't easy to write like Rucks' narration, but this story is just so damn good!
The last comment was 38 weeks and 5 days before this one, so trying to get you to continue this story is probably a futile effort, but I still need to try. This is an excellent story, and I'd like to see it finished.

I have to give you props for a job well done!

Monsieur,

Please continue. From what I can tell, this story will be another dead one again. Please finish.

Tried to get the tone right for Ruck's narration but half the time it comes out sounding like Rorshach. Sorry for that.

I think you manged to get Rucks very well, the whole time I was reading this I was "hearing" in his voice.

Onto the next chapter.

As I said on the previous chapter you've got the narration down square.

I really should go and replay and finish this game... .

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