I am a budding electronic music producer who's trying his hand-erm-hoof at writing. I use ClubCreate, FLStudio 11, and play the piano and ukulele. check my channel for Let's Plays and Music and stuff.
Something happens and Fluttershy's wings are gone. She can't do anything about it as she falls from a great height. Rainbow Dash tries to catch her falling friend... I will let you read it instead of telling the whole thing.
I was on /r/mylittleonions and I saw this pic. I couldn't help but try my hand again at sad stories.
The artist's name is ZirBronium and has a deviantArt. Go ahead and go look at his stuff by clicking his name.
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Not bad. But not good either. I don't think that I could write a better story but I think that there's definitely room for improvement.
)
(Oh and you should be sad for killing the best pony
Good job! But Fluttershy...
One thing though, you should have a "Random" tag for Fluttershy's wings.
My favorite part?
"Reach for me..."
Didn't I just read something like this in one of RainbowBob's vastly superior fics?
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Believe me, friend. I am.
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I should? Alright. I'll do it.
I just read the edit and I have to say that it was better than last time. You deserved that like. Keep up the good work.
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Glad to hear you liked the edit. If you want to look at my other works, just tell me what your tastes are and I'll see if I can find anything that suits your tastes in the stuff that I write.
3024351 I just read that comment and realized I only read the part which was an answer to my comment
I vaguely sorta kinda liked this
it wasn't bad but I think I didn't get as invested in it as I was hoping for because it was all happening so quick, it definitely wasn't bad though! 
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I was actually trying to go for the slow and descriptive sort of pace.
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Hmm, maybe try going uber nuts with drawing it out? like adding heaps and heaps of description and stuff? Or just ignore me cause it might just be me
as long as you're happy with your work
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One problem.
That was uber nuts and descriptive for me.
I just lack experience and finesse that a "true" author has.
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it definitely wasn't the worst thing I've read and it was still worth reading 
Hahaha, don't worry, just keep putting your work out there and I'm sure it'll meet my ridiculously high standards
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Yaaay I somewhat impressed someone today
Sort of
Kind of
Not really I guess...
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Hahaha, nah I'm impressed :raritywink