When Agent Overcast from the Equestrian Secret Service is assigned to the Equestrian Mines to investigate the disappearances of some miners, he finds himself trapped in something much deeper than anypony could have ever guessed. Along with Rainbow Dash and Twilight, he discovers that the mines hold a secret. A secret that threatens to unleash a horror like Equestria has never seen before.
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First comment huh?
Okay first off would I be wrong in assuming that this is a "Deadspace in Equestria" thing?
I mean Discord Statue=Marker, Necroponies=Necromorphs, Experimental Hydroponics=Leviathan's Lair.
Anywho I think this is pretty neat and has some potential.
Its well written (good spelling/grammar/format) and the plot seems okay.
However character development seems very lacking.
Also you should change the story's status to "On Hiatus" unless you're releasing a new chapter.
I remember reading this on ponychan and really liked it. It has some unsettling moments with the disappearances and all. Good tension and action, although the fight scenes could be improved. This fic deserves more attention.