Trixie has a bad run in with the Trottingham ponies, but one stands up for her and offers his services as a bodyguard. She accepts and they embark on a journey to find the one true audience Trixie deserves.
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LunarShadow
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Looks interesting, Tracking and will read later. Will edit with comment later dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png
^_^ Nice
This the end or is there more to this?
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i love her
Nice. I like this.
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Trixie approves
You're so lucky the fic list froze, you got over 100 views from that alone
This story is awesome
798559 Holy cow, that image is incredible
I may say im quite impressed, I was really hoping for a Skyrim reference or a arrow to the knee but what the hay it was still good.
Oh my goddesses! I remember you now that I checked your page. You're the author of A Filly's Wings! A great fiction for those who haven't read it. So I'll be sure to read this one, definitely!
Trixie indeed approves of this.
I don't do this often, but I'll probably read this. The image is absolutely brilliant, not just in skill, but in concept and style. The concept the the story is pretty damn good too
798846 she is lovely s59.radikal.ru/i163/1112/67/e3a2e5cc6a26.gif
798994 She and Chrysalis are my favs
I shall read this at four in the morning when I wake up. See ya then!
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Chrysalis as noting on her
p.s. i love Chrysalis
798994I think its kinda creepy
799140 hahahah I'm going to use 24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lwtrbmfNH11r3hia9o1_400.jpg to make her real
(p.s. I'm joking )
799182DONT USE LOVECRAFT NAME IN BANE!
dont make me use chuck norris...
799203 a wild chuck norris appears i choose you kinky pie 24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lwqw2zXodV1r1jgw0o1_1280.png
799247*stares then...wait for it...FWOOMPH!"
Simple, sweet and to the point! I loved it.
Fav'd this story and i think i might check some more stuff by you out. 
799266
haaaaaa!!! no kinky... ok now you done it I'm using my backup plan
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meet your muffin maker
799317SUP DERPY!
can I have a muffin?
pweeeeaaaasssseeee?
799327iambrony.steeph.tp-radio.de/mlp/gif/tumblr_lzhob4P4gu1rpyeioo1_400.gif
799364okay lets drop this already okay mon?
have some cool music to keep you busy
799367 lol have a good day man
p.s. it was fun here have a pony
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great story, i think it is-
799247 -what the hades is that?
799676 well my friend that is a pony a very sexy pony
799689 "well my friend that is a pony a very sexy pony"
yeeeaaah no.
that aside i bid thee continue author. i wish to hear more about this semi-romantic buddy comedy.
This was excellent, and I really liked it. Just this one thing that caught my eye.
Trixie raised an eyebrow curiously. “You seem to know about me. We’ve been traveling a few days, yet I know almost nothing about you. It’s only fair.”
Wouldn't those both be Trixie, since you have her remain in that speech pattern the entire time?
After seeing that stats, I almost guaruntee that this will be featured. If only my story had more likes
...
Loved this thing!! Love it to pieces! Sequel now! Please?
This is excellent. Nice work on capturing Trixie's natural arrogance and toning it down as it went on.
798994 true that!
I've heard of harsh critics, but geez!
With a response like that, you'd think Trottingham was an anonymous Internet forum. 
798557 - Unfortunately, I had no plans for a part 2. And if I were to do one, well.. I don't know. It'd take awhile. I have no clue where to take it
798855 - I specifically avoided the arrow to the knee joke because my reviewer threatened to bitch slap me through the internet if I did. I agreed.
799111 - I hope you enjoy it!
799971 - If I had a sequel to give.
And to all of you I didn't address, thank you very much for taking a peek at this fiction. I hope I did not fail to satisfy.
With Regards,
LunarShadow
799798 Actually, Trixie referenced herself in the first person alot when addressing Iron. I think as time had gone by, she had become more and more comfortable and layed off the "The Great and Powerful Trixie" stuff with him. (At least i think that was the point) Really added to the story imho.
I wish i could post pic, it just doesn't seem to work for me somehow. I have a drawing that is on my computer that i think closely resembles Iron.
799247
That is a Pie i can sink my teeth into
800670 What the FUCK is with your avatar?
801950 What? Never seen an eye being forced open and having it's Conjunctiva sewn back into place?
801979 I'm just wandering why it's on a pony site
801983 I have seen many non pony avatars on this site. Didn't think it would matter. Along with the fact i can't draw for crap and nothing already made has really caught my fancy in terms of avatars.
801990 Eh, whatever floats your boat.
awesome story dude
really good read and im not a fan of trixie XD
it's very good but i feel that the romance is a bit rushed
This is great! Absolutely worthy of EQD
This is one of them stories I could read a hundred times over...Outstanding work, LunarShadow 