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Follow the tale of Desert Dust, daughter to Equestria's greatest explorer and adventurer, Daring Do, as she uncovers a sinister plot to harness unnatural forces and meddle with the balance of life and death. Following the trail left to her by her missing mother, Dust will have to traverse the world and travel to far-flung locations, searching for her lost mother and continuing her quest for the legendary Cask of Undeath.

This fic features some moderate violence, but nothing too gruesome.

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 31 )

nice pacing and very thrilling. another solid chapter. good work. :pinkiehappy:

another great chapter. the dream sequence was awesome. pacing is great. keep up the good work. :pinkiehappy:

ive been eagerly awaiting this update. the action was simpyl riveting and left me wanting more. nice fast pace. you have hooked me. good work. cant wait till the next update. :pinkiehappy:

wow that was intense. dust is such a well written character. moar please :yay: great work. im also gonna read the two mare do well books when i get a chance. did you do the cover of this fic yourself?

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I do all of my fanfic covers. I guess it's because it gives me more freedom to make it look the way I want it to.. Regardless of whether the art is any good or not. :pinkiecrazy:

3286215 dude your art is great. very talented man n i mean that suprised your fics arent getting the attention they truly deserve. well from one author to another i am a fan dude :pinkiehappy: keep em coming. great work. :twilightsmile: :yay:

solid action. well paced. good developments and some nice emotion. solid chapter. great work. :pinkiehappy:

great chapter. many have hate for over the top action which is just about the dumbest thing imo. fiction is supposed to suspend belief. its a realm where anything and everything is possible. look at indy for example none of that action could really happen same thing with die hard but i love action. this action is adrenaline fueled and fast paced. i love the indy feel of your story and your dust character. great job cant wait till the next chapter. are you planning a sequel? i hope you make one. :pinkiehappy:

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I must admit that I had ever so much fun writing this so far, so I am definitely thinking of doing a sequel or two.. :twilightsmile:

moar :yay:. daring and dust s reunion was emotional and unexpected. fuse seems like a possible love interest for dust. cant wait till the next update!
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Apologies for the spaces between updates.. Been a little busy with schoolwork. :twilightsheepish: I'll try and update more often, when I can. :twilightsmile:

3329649 no i get it. its fine. believe me its worth the wait. :twilightsmile:

no moar. :flutterrage: great chapter and i like how the changelings were being twisted evil. great work. as always i look forward to the next update. :pinkiehappy:

nice chapter. action and pacing were great. liked it. cant wait till the next update. good work. :pinkiehappy:

amazing chapter. action packed and fast paced. i really enjoy your style of writing. and da tentacle part was total ownage. good frickin job padded :yay: i await the next update with no patience. :pinkiehappy:

epic! creatures were a nice addition to the action. dust is such a well thought oc and a loveable character at that. key blade? kingdom hearts reference? love the chapter. good work as usual. cant wait till next update :yay:

3453454 it hit me instantly. still a nice reference even if it wasnt intentional. i look forward to reading the next chapter. :pinkiehappy:

great world building and solid action. cant wait to find out how they get the cask back. good work. next update is even more anticipated! :pinkiehappy:

nice :pinkiehappy: i love you action sequences. very indy/die hard. the queen! :pinkiegasp: nice cliff hanger as well. i eagerly await the next update. great chapter. :yay:

here, again, i see the same problems u had in MDW Everfree...that ending was...well, lack luster in the extreme. i wasnt even going to read this fic because Everfree was such a disappointment, but i did and i gotta say, u had ur good points here, like with Everfree, but it felt a little like u were trying to rewrite and meld together aspects of the first three Indiana Jones movies. the cask was like the Ark, the guardian monster and the temple is protected seemed quite a bit like Temple of Doom, and u had elements of the Last Crusade as well...

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I can't help being an Indy fan. Sorry 'bout that. :ajbemused: Besides, I do try with these fics, you know. I'm quite aware I'm not the best with endings, but I'd basically come to the end of the story. If people want me to rewrite the ending, I will. But I don't see why a short-ish conclusion was so bad. :facehoof:

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Thank you so much for your support throughout this. You've been fab. :pinkiehappy: And I can tell you as a matter of fact that I have some ideas melding together for a sequel, so I hope I can start that soon. :twilightsmile:

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There. I've fleshed out the ending a little, so it's not quite so brief. But it's remaining as it is now. Apologies if you don't like it, but that's just how I wanted to end it. :twilightsheepish:

Well, that was....nightmarish. :rainbowderp:
I knew the Cask would backfire on Chrysalis, but I didn't expect a "Dragged off to Hell" fate for her. Oh well, Daring and her daughter are reunited, the Cask is destroyed forever, and hopefully the Changelings will get a less psychotic ruler with Chrysalis gone.

Excellent work!

3527350 Did I not reply to this? Sorry. Yay! Sequel! Can't wait to read!

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