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Bendita Locura
One could argue I am an ambitious writer... though fanfics aren't typically my scene. Who knows? I'll probably think of something cool.
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The pic made me shit myself
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Wow, I think this is pretty original, aa well as creepy and intriguing. I'm gonna follow it.
2994113 Well, considering where I know it's been used, that's hardly surprising. :)
Manhunt doesn't get enough love. I'm definitely taking a peek at this.
2994113 The author's avatar or the story's?
2997243 I wouldn't blame him either way.
Now after reading...
*sigh* so is the first thing they're gonna see a student gouging the other's tongue out with a scalpel blade welded to a Bic pen tube? Lovely.
To put what the Mane 6 are gonna find in a nutshell:
WE'LL FLOOD THE STREETS WITH CORPSES!
... got click-happy and pressed the Publish button before the chapter was fully edited, didn't you?
3011844 Caught me red-handed. Freaking mouse was giving me troubles. Sorry to disappoint you.
But do expect the next chapter complete and up soon.
Can I give you a slight tip? If you're going for a complete overhaul, unpublish the chapter you'll be working on and re-publish it after you're done, that way we'll know you updated it
That said... Oh God. Oh my fucking GOD.
This, so far, is the very best chapter in terms of quality, and it's horrible at the same time (but in the good way). Genital mutilation, eye damage, bones breaking, glass torture, all things I could easily visualize a particularly crazed high-schooler do. It's like someone threw a crack-and-amphetamines bomb in the city. Ngh... 
The ponies' reactions was leagues better as well, in-character but still with a bit of denial: Rainbow Dash was more mature than I expected, but that's perfectly okay, I can see where she's coming from if I extrapolate a little on how mature canon!Equestria is. Celestia's, too, surprised me, and in a good way: her shed of a tear demonstrates she's just as much of a sensible pony as well as she is the Great Princess.
DEFINITELY re-upvoted. Wish I could do it twice.
I'll just let someone else congratulate the win that this revamped chapter was:
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2994113 Pic made me grab a tortilla and some cheese so that my stomach doesn't growl while reading this potential gorefic.
More, please
!
Although, having never played Manhunt, I have no idea whether or not this crazy outburst of death came from Manhunt or OP's imagination.
3115355 I'll give you this to brew over:
3131779 I'm almost scared to watch that.
3133973 Do not be afraid, grasshopper. The cutscenes aren't actually that gruesome. It's the gameplay where all the gold is.
3131779 Hey, are those subtitles German? I thought that Manhunt was banned in Germany.
3148837 Now that you mention it, I don't know. I didn't even see it was German subs.
Now go back to writing!
3150401 Yeah, about that. School starts for me tomorrow, and it's gonna be my busiest year yet. It'll be a miracle if I can set side aside to write.
But don't get me wrong; I'm not abandoning this story. 
3148837 It's not about gruesome stuff. It's about jumpscares.
I've got this weird paranoia of jumpscares.
3157664 Good for you, Manhunt is a game where YOU are the jumpscare.
3162613 Yaaaaaaay!
You had me at manhunt
I just found my next weekend!
You got clicky-happy again, didn't you, ya tease?
3278567 I Got the notification, looked at the amount of chapters, said "dafuq!?', and then read your comment.
Thank you for unknowingly clearing things up.
On a related note: This means that Chapter 4 is kind of almost done!
3280694 Glad to be of service.
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3280939 That picture just proved that Derp is mightier than Pony.
3278567 I always confuse save for publish. Not sure why.
Well, you can always get Manhunt off Steam.
3372247 I know. I'm just piss broke.
Well it was fun while it lasted Rest In Peace sad to see this story be canceled