Wenck Steiner
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The German
I like the German best I forget his name
2965798 Too busy to scroll up and see "Steiner".
Yep.
German is best.
Steiner is my favorite.
the german
I like it, but there were a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes. You misspelled a lot of words, and did not put capitals on proper nouns.
2966436 Worry not good sir for it shall be fixed!
Spelling and grammar errors, and kind of a stereotypical combat story, but it has me intrigued.
what is their full list of weapons?
The German
2965925 What can I say I'm Lazy
2967685 That will be addressed in chapter 3. But so far they have:
Wenck - mp40, Luger
Jean - mp18, he lost his pistol
Archi - Lee Enfield no.4
Just seeing the story description made me chuckle. "a german, a french, and a british." French and british aren't nouns. It should say "a German, a Frenchman, and a Brit."
2971125 "a german, a french, and a british." refer to "3 soldiers".
2971223
It still sounds weird when you say it out loud...
2971237
Well, I'll have to agree with you there.
Well holy tits, sudden goblins! They make everything better.
Shit just got real
Wat
Talk about overkill, princesses...
so awesome
also try check out my fic about WW2 aces 
2983577 I will.
Shinning is a misspelling at the start.
Proper is Shining.
Ex:Shining Armor
2983634 Thanks, will fix right now.
Thanks for promoting
Goddammit. This story was so promising, then you had to throw in fucking humanXpony. Untracking.
2987685 If you don't life humanxpony then pay no attention to those parts. The relations have almost no impact on the main plot.
Lol, so much comedy XD has me laughing and accidentally annoying people
I just don't know what went wrong :3
hey man nice story :) one question are u German?
2990561 Thanks. And no, I'm not german. I'm from Argentina.
Steiner is best Pony <3 :D
o my gosh i love this fic pls i NEED more :D
your German is really good if you had questions ask me im German :3
and Steiner is best Pony <3
This is getting to good
Well I hope the Brit doesn't fall in love or anything
faust?
THI IS AMAZING!!!! I love this fic!
this is so sad i had teari in my Eyes man :( but this Story is Great!
very good story so far.
i like it.
How the fuck do the Airships have HEAT if tanks don't exist in Equestria? How does this work? Not even goblins have tanks, and if they did, they'd have automatic weaponry, and tanks. This makes no sense
And 155MM HE rounds. No. If the ponies have this firepower, the goblins would have guns, ponies too. There is NO work-around for this. It makes no sense. My eyes hurt from reading this.
3012894 The human invented all that. It clearly says the humans have that technology (HEAT shells). Ponies don't, because knowledge was lost.
Also, the ponies don't know what HEAT is, YOU do, because I told you in the story.
And didn't you read? The goblins have airships with howtisers too. And there are only a few guns, because, once again, knowledge was lost.
Goblins don't have guns? Don't worry, read on and you'll understant soon.
When can we expect the next chapter?
3016148 As a matter if fact. Today I'll finish giving it the finishing touches.
3016683 yay
So far, so good
Shit load of spelling mistake, you forgot capitalize the name
. The fighting is great, the minor comedy are great. Over all is good (disregard the grammar) 
I also recoomend you to add some music, to boost the intense of battle (Add link to Youtube) [Sabaton would be great 
]
Good to see that the archie is still not falling for any ponies
Anyway good story
I.want.MOORREE!!!!
3024971 Then more shall come!
3025610 yay!!!!!!!