After becoming an alicorn, Twilight has left the petty life of a princess for the glorious adventures of the sky. Joined by her friends, they ravage the skies in search of the rich. Celestia is heartbroken by her students betrayal, and refuses to chase her deadly skyship, until finally forced into action by Luna. As Twilight and company are pursued, they continually elude the efforts of both Luna's and Celestia's respective ships: The Darkheart and The Skyfire, captained by Trixie and Shining Armor.
Chapters (3)
Too SHORT! Combine chapters before publishing you dumbkof!
2930907 Yeah, what he said. But more polite.
An inspiring story. Great for your first time. I understand the shortage because I also have that problem! Well done!!
2931201>>2931134 wooo! Someone actually listened to me! I feel so special!!
Dude listen I am in the process of figuring out my own story and let me tell you, my chapters are approx.3,000 words each, and I want to shorten them! Don't worry, the reason they want longer chapters is cause they want larger portions to read (it's like a good piece of pie, you just want the largest slice). Just do what feels natural to you. Now if the pacing feels off then that is when you should reorganize, but hey i'm not much of a writer myself so
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Edit: okay I agree to what they are saying for the first chapter, it felt like it ended abruptly, but the second ended at the right spot. Nicely done.
This is good stuff.
Why do you care about chapter length?
No attack just wondering.
If this chapter says what you want to say and it fits in your plans
for your story, you are doing well.
More please!
more please thank you