Rainbow Dash gets mad at her own mistakes and takes it out on Fluttershy. After apologizing she realizes the extent of damage she caused. She promises to never hurt her again. They soon discover their feelings for each other.
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Hey, glad to see this on FimFiction! I've been reading it on FanFiction.net for quite a while now
Nice chapter. I look forward to more.
Both the nurse and doc were well done, as was RD's treatment of Red Heart.
Here's hoping for some more Flutterdash action soon. (Like RD to break a few rules... sneak in etc)
I'm really liking this story, and I am a person of very high standards, and loves few a story, but it seems to me the only flaw you've made, is that when a new person is talking, you need to start a new paragraph, now other than that, this story is okay-ly written.
Now Love and Tolerance to all!
~Ilovesparklez13/OverToneAPegaSister
2917170 hey i will totally volunteer proof read for you, it would be awesome!
Now Love and Tolerance to all!
~Ilovesparklez13/OverToneAPegaSister
Can I say really fast that I just love these stories with self injury in them? So hard to find.
Very impressive, many Flutterdashers often shy away from the dark tone for fear of having their stories bashed.
I like how Fluttershy self mutilating her wings wasn't ntirely an overeaction, she did consider worse option but was rational enough to deny them. I even like Rainbow's dedication to help heal her friend and of course the tender moments are good too and their working their way through the story. I'm glad you didn't them confess or kiss... yet.
Anyway this is good I'll be reading more soon. If you're not too busy to ignore this of course.
Oh yeah and uh here, have a
Actually you know what forget about the
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Very good so far :) Please keep writing :)
So I read more of this on fanfiction and this is just amazing.
Have a like, a fave, and a follow
Some thoughts on it:
-Your writing is really good. I think I saw maybe one or two grammar error.
-The paceing is slow and I think it's good that way.
-Everyone is writen in character.
-Some times having to instead of too in the later chapters is wierd
Can't really say anything else without giving spoilers,
so
Thank you for writing this, and I'm eagerly waiting for more
Good stuff.
Hi Everyone! I am so so sorry I haven't updated or anything recently. My beloved yet stupid internet was on hiatus for about a week and a half (Felt like forever) But I got it back on, although I might look for something more reasonable. To the perspn pffering to proof read, thanks, that's very nice of you, I could use all the help I can get. Well, I'm off to work, but I shall be back and try and get the chapters I already have together. Thank you for reading and commenting and such.
sorry to break the tension, but
Fluttershy "Please, feel free to eat the rest of the snacks. The nuts are good to."
"you're gonna love my nuts"
Hah, Dash's reactions were priceless.
~Wywint