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CosmicAfro


Account is very much on a non-disclosed Hiatus :D TO THE MOON!

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He was a man, a foolish man, who found the way there.
The only problem is not all humans make it to Equestria, not all humans make it back.
These are his final thoughts, the only thing we know of him.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 45 )

I actually like this...

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I guess I could write a second part, but this was meant to be a one-off.

Who knows.

~Cosmic

You know... I should really read your stuff soon.

~Skeeter The Lurker

That was interesting. I don't know whether I'd prefer it as a one-shot or a part of something longer. Either way, I liked it, I think.

So, thanks for that.

Well this was cool, I want to do a reading of it. Can I? My previous work can be found here, if you don't want me to just say, I won't be offended

2910556
Willsons doing a reading of will?

All too appropriate! Please go forth and make vocal this piece!

2911026 I will get to this as soon as I can find a quiet moment. Might take a while they are few and far between.

2911442
Uh... Arachnophobes?

JBL

2911442 I'm guessing it isn't Ryan Miller?

To be honest, you should have left it at the first letter, it leaves the rest up to imagination.

But now that you have continued this freight train, there is no chance of stopping it until the end of the line, whether or not it derails between here and there is up to you.

2916000
Yeah, I agree. This was merely an experiment, so I'm removing part two.

2916656
I will likely continue this, but in a different way than before. It will involve spiders.

I shall tell you why it sucks: it was written by you. :flutterrage:

Nah I'm joking it's not bad, but very, incredibly, extremely vague, even for a short fic. You've piqued my interest, I support more of it all the way!

2916237
There was a part two!? Why did you remove it :fluttershbad:

2943386
It was awful. If I ever get in "that" mood again, I know exactly what I'm going to write.

2945063
Ok, I guess. If it was that bad then that was probably a good idea. Was it just the storyline that was bad or the writing?

2947423
No, I made him live as he "miraculously escaped." When I woke up the next morning out of my caffeinated stupor I actually said, "Well, I f@#$ed up this time."

So instead I'll continue this in a much different fashion than previously. It was just a mistake on my part thinking it would work.

So that's pretty much a confirmation that he miraculously lived to tell the tale.

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It was a pain in the bubble bottom to format that hand. Seriously, it's going to give me nightmares, I'll never look at my phalanges the same way again.

Nice job on the hand.

Also the nature of this chapter... Curious.

I like.

~Skeeter The Lurker

So you've derailed and started again. This time you have chosen a different track to persue, wise choice.

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I call this fanfiction "progressive" in a way that each new chapter that I may or may not add will show signs of progress. We'll see though.

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This is a link to a reading of will I did, I hope you enjoy it. If you don't like it please tell me as I always welcome feed back.
http://youtu.be/VtPsqVlPaZY

2973342
Oh! I guess my reply PM didn't go through. Huh... anyways, thanks again and I love your voice for this. I'm flattered and jealous.

2974041 I should have chapter two up in a little bit, shouldn't be as long of a wait. I don't think I've been getting PM's it weird.

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Hey, sometimes the site messes up with PMs, it happens. I already linked the first chapter's reading.

The second chapter should fit to your voice a bit better than the non-serious guy. I appreciate all you're doing.

2974093 It's fun and the more I practice the better I get and maybe if I'm lucky I could get a career out of it, so thank you for letting me practice.

2974093 Chapter 2 is up tell me what you think, http://youtu.be/RfeP1pOEqnY I'm personally a bit unhappy with the end but otherwise I don't think it's to bad.

Hope you enjoy it.

2989026 Lol. I was wondering if you knew any other story's that you think would suit my voice?

Well that was certainly interesting, I liked it. :pinkiesmile:

3335010
Yup, meant to come back to this particular story a while ago. i hope you're starting to see a pattern develop :3

Hmm. I think it might be prudent to call my travel agent and nix that trip to Equestria.

Yeah.

3335040
At least the Everfree.

interesting as always

Well...Mr. Afro. You have yourself a very interesting story. Are you sure it's finished?

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No, I'm sure it's not. I do have plans for it to continue but I have to be in a rare mood to write these chapters. The complete rating is... I forgot my original intention for that. But I had a reason, I assure you.

3406996 Ok. Well. It's been pleasant talking to you. *Disappears Mysteriously*

Hmn. I wonder what's next.

Hmm... I like this story... It's interesting how you've executed it.

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