A creature of old has been present in Equestria since the beginning of the rule of the alicorns, watching, waiting. He saw their fall and the sisters' rise to power. Now, for the first time in eons, he steps from watching and takes action.
[Prototype 2]/MLP crossover. One of Alex Mercer's Evolved gets sent to Equestria, stricken with an obsession with security, can this untrusting being ever find peace if he does not allow himself to?
After a teleportation spell goes wrong, Vaati finds himself in Equestria. The world's most powerful mage is about to learn about the world's most powerful magic: Friendship.
Sorry for the delayed response, I've been busy with other things. I'm not sure how many stories I've critiqued, quite a few, though not all of them are on here. I usually only do ones that either interest me or someone requests me to look at.
How many stories do you think you've critiqued? I'm guessing you don't know the exact answer, so I'm looking for an estimate. I'm just simply curious is all. Can I be critiqued on one of my stories?
You have my thanks for following me. I hope you will enjoy your stay as I try to keep to the standard that I have somehow set for myself.
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Sorry for the delayed response, I've been busy with other things. I'm not sure how many stories I've critiqued, quite a few, though not all of them are on here. I usually only do ones that either interest me or someone requests me to look at.
How many stories do you think you've critiqued? I'm guessing you don't know the exact answer, so I'm looking for an estimate. I'm just simply curious is all.
Can I be critiqued on one of my stories?
882908 Unfortunately not, I just google searched
"Rainbow dash Christmas hat"
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Yeah I know that, I just guessed at what the google link would look like xD
...wait did it actually work?