Twilight Velvet, in her time a famed romance novelist, visits her daughter in Ponyville to finish her latest work. Will her romantic encounters give her the inspiration she needs?
I have to wonder, as much fooling around that Velvet and (I'm assuming) Night Light have, both seperately and with each other, are you sure that they only have two kids??? (Ok maybe three if you are considering Spike as a son). Somehow I have a crazy prediction that not only will Velvet and Night Light divorce (obvious DUH!!), Night Light confesses that he has a bastard kid, and Velvet would actually consider permanently moving to Ponyville and staying w/ Twilight and Spike. The reason is that she's completely re-energized with her writing, and she sees all sorts of new ideas based on all the different Ponyville ponies she's had......encounters with.
Oh, kudos with the latest chapter, another nice title to it.
Finally, Fluttershy as acting weather captain while RD is away?!! Is there a similar story to that premise already made?
2922873 I'm not aware of a story with Flutters being made acting captain in RD's absence. But there's the story "Flash Fog" by Kwakerjak in which she is put in charge of handling a crisis by the Department of Weather, outranking even Rainbow in her capacity as a fog specialist.
2923067 At this rate I expect Velvet to buck all the rest of Ponyville, least some of the Wonderbolts, all of the Elements including Twilight, Celestia, Luna, Cadence, Shining Armor and many more. Doubt Spike will actually be allowed to try and get with Rarity. She'll probably tell him she enjoys the lesbian sex she gets at the Spa and from Twilight's mother more and that she's not into males. Basically Velvet's next book is gonna be based entirely on what she does in Ponyville, A whorse who bucks every pony she sees.
This went from her getting a bit of comfort sex, to her being a whore. Or at least that's how everyone in town is going to see it, and with that whole mess made by her father mixed in as well, I don't think Twilight is going to be to happy. Especially if she ever learns about how Spike lost his virginity.
2923363 I'm thinking that when this is over Velvet should go apply for a job at the whorsehouse her husband was caught at. Thats basically what she is at this point. She got some comfort sex from Big Mac, had a lesbian experience with Lotus. She gave Spike a blowjob and had a threesome with Thunderlane and Snowflake.
2924249 Agreed. I feel a little misled with this fic now. I can understand the first three. Yes, even SPike. Big Mac was a little comfort sex over her lecherous husband, Rarity and the spa ponies was an unexpected but welcome means to relax, and she was trying to help Spike overcome his complex. I can get that.
Whether I agree or disagree, I don't care. I can understand. Now, however, she's banging everyone who looks like a good lay. I feel an incoming elements of harmony sexual encounter coming along, possible an orgy.
“Umfh, this wasn't exactly designed with the well-endowed mare in mind, was it?” she grunted, trying to pull it up to where it would actually cover her nipples. Still she felt her shoulders being constrained by the fabric and the thong was riding up her cheeks, leaving very little to the imagination.
2924249 I'm not saying she's a bad person, and if she wants to bang strangers, that's her business. However, every kind of 'fun' has consequences and Velvet is just not thinking about any of them.
At this point she's forcing Twilight into a horrible position; her father's actions have already cast a bad look on her and the royalty at large, add in Velvet's actions and suddenly Twilight has only two real choices.
One, weather the storm as it were and more than likely gain a reputation that will stick with her for an insanely long time due to immortality. Two, publicly disown her parents, distance herself from their actions. And considering that Celestia and Luna were willing to threaten the press before to ensure the integrity of their public image, I don't think Twilight really has much of a choice.
So go ahead Velvet, screw some more ponies. Heck I hear Gilda is back in town, might as well cause an international scandal while you're at it you poor dumb woman.
Sigh, I'm not even going to be slightly satisfied when the shit storm hits, just sad.
So Velvet is gonna end up bucking everypony in Ponyville? How soon til she starts after the Elements of Harmony and her daughter?
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Not too long, I reckon
that's what I'm looking forward too.
I really want to know who she fucks next!
You really had to up the ante, didn't you???
I have to wonder, as much fooling around that Velvet and (I'm assuming) Night Light have, both seperately and with each other, are you sure that they only have two kids??? (Ok maybe three if you are considering Spike as a son). Somehow I have a crazy prediction that not only will Velvet and Night Light divorce (obvious DUH!!), Night Light confesses that he has a bastard kid, and Velvet would actually consider permanently moving to Ponyville and staying w/ Twilight and Spike. The reason is that she's completely re-energized with her writing, and she sees all sorts of new ideas based on all the different Ponyville ponies she's had......encounters with.
Oh, kudos with the latest chapter, another nice title to it.
Finally, Fluttershy as acting weather captain while RD is away?!! Is there a similar story to that premise already made?
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I'm not aware of a story with Flutters being made acting captain in RD's absence. But there's the story "Flash Fog" by Kwakerjak in which she is put in charge of handling a crisis by the Department of Weather, outranking even Rainbow in her capacity as a fog specialist.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/51991/flash-fog
It's a good read and I can highly recommend it. I took some inspiration from it for this particular chapter.
YEAH!!
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For some reason, I fully expect incest out of this.
Just a hunch.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Well at least the sex is good.
2923067 At this rate I expect Velvet to buck all the rest of Ponyville, least some of the Wonderbolts, all of the Elements including Twilight, Celestia, Luna, Cadence, Shining Armor and many more. Doubt Spike will actually be allowed to try and get with Rarity. She'll probably tell him she enjoys the lesbian sex she gets at the Spa and from Twilight's mother more and that she's not into males. Basically Velvet's next book is gonna be based entirely on what she does in Ponyville, A whorse who bucks every pony she sees.
This went from her getting a bit of comfort sex, to her being a whore. Or at least that's how everyone in town is going to see it, and with that whole mess made by her father mixed in as well, I don't think Twilight is going to be to happy. Especially if she ever learns about how Spike lost his virginity.
Nice
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i want this to happen. incest is hawt.
man there is a long list of ponies who she should bang
2923363 I'm thinking that when this is over Velvet should go apply for a job at the whorsehouse her husband was caught at. Thats basically what she is at this point. She got some comfort sex from Big Mac, had a lesbian experience with Lotus. She gave Spike a blowjob and had a threesome with Thunderlane and Snowflake.
Best smut story in a while here. Keep 'em coming (pun intended )!
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Agreed. I feel a little misled with this fic now. I can understand the first three. Yes, even SPike. Big Mac was a little comfort sex over her lecherous husband, Rarity and the spa ponies was an unexpected but welcome means to relax, and she was trying to help Spike overcome his complex. I can get that.
Whether I agree or disagree, I don't care. I can understand. Now, however, she's banging everyone who looks like a good lay. I feel an incoming elements of harmony sexual encounter coming along, possible an orgy.
I haven't seen anyone do this but I feel that this song is appropriate for this fic.
Of course, replace the right name
I think this is the first and only story I've read where Snowflake ever gets with a girl.
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Oh, so that's where that came from. Now I see.
From now on I might have to play that song in the background while writing instead of the instrumental version of 'True, True Friend.'
I thought Twilight Velvet's plot WAS the main plot. :P
This is now my gold standard when it comes to gonzo style scenes.
I'd love to see a scene between her and Colgate at some point, with horn play or creative use of magic.
Velvet has been eaten out already, so I'm guessing that her eating pussy is coming?
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DO IT FILLY!
Somebody needs to draw a pic of this.
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I'm not saying she's a bad person, and if she wants to bang strangers, that's her business. However, every kind of 'fun' has consequences and Velvet is just not thinking about any of them.
At this point she's forcing Twilight into a horrible position; her father's actions have already cast a bad look on her and the royalty at large, add in Velvet's actions and suddenly Twilight has only two real choices.
One, weather the storm as it were and more than likely gain a reputation that will stick with her for an insanely long time due to immortality. Two, publicly disown her parents, distance herself from their actions. And considering that Celestia and Luna were willing to threaten the press before to ensure the integrity of their public image, I don't think Twilight really has much of a choice.
So go ahead Velvet, screw some more ponies. Heck I hear Gilda is back in town, might as well cause an international scandal while you're at it you poor dumb woman.
Sigh, I'm not even going to be slightly satisfied when the shit storm hits, just sad.
Where's Cloud Kicker when you need her?
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There will be a reckoning. But it might take a different form than what you would expect.
I'm writing a clopfic here, not making social commentary, after all.
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True, but a good clop fic also makes sense.
I don't want to see this end badly for any of them, but if news of what she's done ever gets out, I don't see how else it could end.
Still, your story and I hope to see more soon.
Well I do hope we see how the Spike and Rarity part of this ends, or perhaps a side story of it's own.
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Says the guy who writes harem fics but not fast enough for me! GET WRITING!!!
...I-I mean... If th-tha-that's OK with y-you...
wow
... Did he knew what he said then? Did he knew what it meant? Do ponies in this universe eat meat?