Twilight Velvet, in her time a famed romance novelist, visits her daughter in Ponyville to finish her latest work. Will her romantic encounters give her the inspiration she needs?
I don't think that changeling understands; he just busted in on two unicorn who gave birth to the strongest unicorn in Equestria( for all we know) and the element of fucking magic, their power levels are easily over 9000, plus Spike is there to? he's fucked.
I'll take Films Directed by M. Nigh Shamaylan for 800, Alex.
This is quite a twist!!
OK, now I'm slowly thinking that this has something to do with Blueblood. I don't understand why he would all of a sudden decides to side w/Chystallis. But it ultimately and surprisingly has to be him. I mean, who else still has a head up his or her plot that would have enough clout to start some crazy shit? Now I know what you're saying--Discord trying to create chaos again!!--**buzzer** I don't think so. Discord is all about pranks and weird mayhem; it just doesn't seem his M.O. for something like what is going on happening and he's the mastermind.
Yeah, I'm starting to think that somehow, the fact that all of the stuff that has happened and been published to be printed, is to embarrass the Princesses--even the newest one--and now they got their families and other stuff into it. Almost a direct shout for Blueblood.
Things are truly getting dark for the entire Sparkle family.....hopefully it just means that dawn is coming very soon.
2985579 The dawn is coming ... next chapter in fact.
How did Blueblood suddenly come into this? No, he's not behind it. The mastermind has already revealed himself. We'll get into a more detailed explanation of his methods and motives at the start of the next chapter.
2985663 I'm guessing way before the story even began. Imago was probably behind that night where Night Light slept around, and if I had to guess, he's behind all the pictures and news articles surrounding him and Velvet. You can get to lots of places and influence lots of people when disguised as someone else.
Velvet should have been shocked by the way he treated her, but somewhere deep down she felt like she deserved it. With a single tear in her eyes she got on her knees and began to lick the last few drops of cum from her husband's dick.
“Haahaha,” he laughed. “How does your own filthy ass taste?”
Velvet didn't reply and had her eyes closed. This was so unlike the stallion she had married. Only when his laugh grew deeper and she heard the sizzle of a magic spell fading away with a green glow, did her foggy mind finally realize that something was very, very wrong.
Her eyes grew wide and she scrambled away from the male Changeling that was standing in front of her, laughing maniacally. “Who are you!?” she screamed.
“Nice to do you,” he replied, his laughs dying down to an evil chuckle. “I'm Prince Imago of the Changeling Empire.”
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...I'm such an idiot....reading this would told me exactly who the antagonist is, all the way down to his glowing green eyes. And the worst thing about it? It was foreshadowed back in chapter 7 when they discussed the changeling invasion and Twilight's disappearance.
Why hello convenient scapegoat on whom all rumors of wanton sexual impropriety can be blamed regardless of whether you actually did them or not.
Seriously, though, I hate that Velvet ends up being pretty much universally slut-shamed like this. Okay, she technically cheated on her husband if you look at it from a strict legal standpoint, but I think practically they were separated (due to his bad behavior... or so it seemed, anyway), so anything (or anyone, in this case) she wanted to do should be fair game. Not only that, but apparently everyone she slept with was single, so it's not like she's ruining any relationships, and she even helped start a couple with the power of her magical vag. Point being, it would be nice if the resolution were that Velvet's sexual adventures are acknowledged but it's not really that big of a deal among the general population (or even seen as a good thing).
hmm...why do i feel like this asshat is also the one spreading the propaganda on velvet and night light. either way im kinda waiting for either spike or shinning armor to come in and push his shit in.
2985518 That would explain Twilight Sparkle's power! Being half-changeling HAD to give her a boost. Factor in the private lessons with Celestia, gaining the Element of Magic AND being the epicentre of the Elements of Harmony!
Dude, at that last line, I lost it. I laughed so hard over the fact that in my head I was able to call it. hahahahahahaha. especially when he used that line.
"What did we do our first time?"
Priceless. you did an amazing job man. and you may have given me a really good idea for my current fic. thanks bro!
And then Spike burst in and ripped the changeling in half, breathing fire over the still twitching corpse as it reduced to ash.
I don't think that changeling understands; he just busted in on two unicorn who gave birth to the strongest unicorn in Equestria( for all we know) and the element of fucking magic, their power levels are easily over 9000, plus Spike is there to? he's fucked.
DAMN
A Changeling!?
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Uh, no. He didn't bust in on Velvet and Night Light. He WAS Night Light.
The night is dark and full of
terrorspenises. Big curved penises.I'll take Films Directed by M. Nigh Shamaylan for 800, Alex.
This is quite a twist!!
OK, now I'm slowly thinking that this has something to do with Blueblood. I don't understand why he would all of a sudden decides to side w/Chystallis. But it ultimately and surprisingly has to be him. I mean, who else still has a head up his or her plot that would have enough clout to start some crazy shit? Now I know what you're saying--Discord trying to create chaos again!!--**buzzer** I don't think so. Discord is all about pranks and weird mayhem; it just doesn't seem his M.O. for something like what is going on happening and he's the mastermind.
Yeah, I'm starting to think that somehow, the fact that all of the stuff that has happened and been published to be printed, is to embarrass the Princesses--even the newest one--and now they got their families and other stuff into it. Almost a direct shout for Blueblood.
Things are truly getting dark for the entire Sparkle family.....hopefully it just means that dawn is coming very soon.
2985579
The dawn is coming ... next chapter in fact.
How did Blueblood suddenly come into this? No, he's not behind it. The mastermind has already revealed himself. We'll get into a more detailed explanation of his methods and motives at the start of the next chapter.
So did Night Light never come to Ponyville in the first place? I guess that the real question is when did Night Light get replaced?
2985663 He might have been replaced before the 'drunken night out' bit.
wehat ze fuk!!!!!!!!!!!!1
I CALLED IT! CHECK MY COMMENT, I FUCKING CALLED IT!
2985518 oh shit! damn that's crazy, spike betta whup his ass
2985688 That's what I'm thinking too.
well the answer here is simple, deadpool kill the reporter, then go to hell get there soul put it back in there body and KILL THEM AGIAN!
Right when you described the green glow of his magic I knew shit was going down.
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I'm guessing way before the story even began. Imago was probably behind that night where Night Light slept around, and if I had to guess, he's behind all the pictures and news articles surrounding him and Velvet. You can get to lots of places and influence lots of people when disguised as someone else.
.......................
...I'm such an idiot....reading this would told me exactly who the antagonist is, all the way down to his glowing green eyes. And the worst thing about it? It was foreshadowed back in chapter 7 when they discussed the changeling invasion and Twilight's disappearance.
......
The plot thickens, after being well done over.
While not as fast as some of the others, I guessed the twist when Night Light picked the lock. Unknown new skill + green magic aura.
Why hello convenient scapegoat on whom all rumors of wanton sexual impropriety can be blamed regardless of whether you actually did them or not.
Seriously, though, I hate that Velvet ends up being pretty much universally slut-shamed like this. Okay, she technically cheated on her husband if you look at it from a strict legal standpoint, but I think practically they were separated (due to his bad behavior... or so it seemed, anyway), so anything (or anyone, in this case) she wanted to do should be fair game. Not only that, but apparently everyone she slept with was single, so it's not like she's ruining any relationships, and she even helped start a couple with the power of her magical vag. Point being, it would be nice if the resolution were that Velvet's sexual adventures are acknowledged but it's not really that big of a deal among the general population (or even seen as a good thing).
Shit abandon thread
hmm...why do i feel like this asshat is also the one spreading the propaganda on velvet and night light. either way im kinda waiting for either spike or shinning armor to come in and push his shit in.
HAHA I FUCKING KNEW IT.
I thought it was sweet up until the changeling showed up.
I was happy! they were getting back together and then you fucked it up! :( I need to know whet happens next!!!!
SPY!!!
Somehow i pity Night Light. Everypony and everyone else is fucking his wife for some time but he had no action whatsoever. XDDD
2990425... i
actually laughed at that
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That would explain Twilight Sparkle's power! Being half-changeling HAD to give her a boost. Factor in the private lessons with Celestia, gaining the Element of Magic AND being the epicentre of the Elements of Harmony!
You got yourself a natural bucking war machine.
Dude, at that last line, I lost it. I laughed so hard over the fact that in my head I was able to call it. hahahahahahaha. especially when he used that line.
"What did we do our first time?"
Priceless. you did an amazing job man. and you may have given me a really good idea for my current fic. thanks bro!
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Dude, you don't get it, it's a changeling pretending to be Night Light. :l
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Me too!