Twilight Velvet, in her time a famed romance novelist, visits her daughter in Ponyville to finish her latest work. Will her romantic encounters give her the inspiration she needs?
2901847 While I have my eperiences with writer's block, I'm definitely gonna finish this one, even if it kills me. I mean, 8 likes within half an hour of this going up.
First let me just say, I am delighted that someone is writing a story about a lesser known character. Especially Twilght Velvet. It's wonderful to see an unknown character getting some spotlight that they deserve, and this is shaping up to be a pretty good read. That being said, Big Macintosh is my favorite character and I've noticed that he is constantly used as clop fodder. So please tell me he is more than just a giant cock with legs. I'm so tired of people letting his deep introspection and wisdom being copped out in place of an unsurpassed dicking. He has so much more to offer a beautiful, older, sexually deprived, and experienced mare than just the biggest, longest, girthiest, hottest, sweatiest, entire day consuming, bed shredding, floor board cracking, growling, wall clawing, animalistic, biting, ass reddening, leg quivering, glass breaking decibels achieved through screaming, oral dominating, breast milking, beyond maximum inside capacity stretching, greatest and darkest lust fulfilling, every position imaginable in every room in the house doing, not able to walk for two days and walking funny for weeks aftermath inducing, plethora of countless mind shattering, nirvana reaching, unparalleled orgasms that only he can deliver. You see what I'm saying?
2902749 I do see where you're coming from. I always try my best to not make my characters, even the one offs, one dimensional. That obviously includes Big Mac, who will most likely be a recurring character in this story.
That being said, if you're looking for that 'love conquers all' story between Big Mac and Velvet that ends in a 'happily ever after', this one's probably not gonna be it.
Big Mac's gonna make his debut in Chapter 1, so I suggest you read that when it comes out and make your own opionion from there.
2902968 I'm well aware that this isn't some sappy romance story about Big Macintosh! XD I just hope that Macintosh is seen as more than some stupid farm pony. I hope he is seen as an actual individual with depth and a personality of his own. . . . And then they have the kind of lower half not functioning for a day or two kind of sex that only Big Macintosh can give XD
Well, despite seeing the big mac tag and the comments. I'm going to hope this turns out with spike showing velvet that she's still got her whole life ahead of her. By turning her into a pile of utterly pleasured pony.
2904118 Yes, Spike will have his turn as well. Although we all know who his heart really belongs to.
Although Big Mac, Aloe and Lotus will make appearances soon, they are really meant more as placeholders for any number of stallions/mares that are lesser known characters. But there's only so many tags one can put on a story. I won't spoil who else will make guest appearances, but I'll say this much: It's not just ponies who can't resist Velvet's charmes.
Chapter 1 is currently in the process of being rewritten and purged of spelling errors and will be posted later today.
I have to ask, will Night Light be making any appearances? Is there going to be any confrontation between him and Velvet due to her doing Ponyville? I'm a sucker for that kind of drama.
Spike is really that naive that he believes Twilight when she told him M means 'Mares Only'? I see yet another story with Spike being shat on. Everybody knows M means 'The Good Stuff'
2905533 She told him when he was a lot younger I would guess, so yeah, he probably was that naive as a kid. That particular ruse is probably not going to last much longer though.
...Sylph, can you please seperate these words for me, I am no good with inserting spaces. This is the moment when you realize I am a total fan boy. What do you mean? I deciphered this perfectly the first time I was reading it...I spend way too much time with Kier, Now THAT I agree with you on. ~Sylpheed and Eli
I'm faving this. I wanna see where this is going.
This must be featured. I want MOAR!!! ...please...
The old writing block? OH NO! The fic is never gonna be finished!
2901847
While I have my eperiences with writer's block, I'm definitely gonna finish this one, even if it kills me. I mean, 8 likes within half an hour of this going up.
I love this community.
First let me just say, I am delighted that someone is writing a story about a lesser known character. Especially Twilght Velvet. It's wonderful to see an unknown character getting some spotlight that they deserve, and this is shaping up to be a pretty good read. That being said, Big Macintosh is my favorite character and I've noticed that he is constantly used as clop fodder. So please tell me he is more than just a giant cock with legs. I'm so tired of people letting his deep introspection and wisdom being copped out in place of an unsurpassed dicking. He has so much more to offer a beautiful, older, sexually deprived, and experienced mare than just the biggest, longest, girthiest, hottest, sweatiest, entire day consuming, bed shredding, floor board cracking, growling, wall clawing, animalistic, biting, ass reddening, leg quivering, glass breaking decibels achieved through screaming, oral dominating, breast milking, beyond maximum inside capacity stretching, greatest and darkest lust fulfilling, every position imaginable in every room in the house doing, not able to walk for two days and walking funny for weeks aftermath inducing, plethora of countless mind shattering, nirvana reaching, unparalleled orgasms that only he can deliver.
You see what I'm saying?
2902749
I do see where you're coming from. I always try my best to not make my characters, even the one offs, one dimensional. That obviously includes Big Mac, who will most likely be a recurring character in this story.
That being said, if you're looking for that 'love conquers all' story between Big Mac and Velvet that ends in a 'happily ever after', this one's probably not gonna be it.
Big Mac's gonna make his debut in Chapter 1, so I suggest you read that when it comes out and make your own opionion from there.
I want to see where this ride is headed
2902968
I'm well aware that this isn't some sappy romance story about Big Macintosh! XD
I just hope that Macintosh is seen as more than some stupid farm pony. I hope he is seen as an actual individual with depth and a personality of his own.
.
.
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And then they have the kind of lower half not functioning for a day or two kind of sex that only Big Macintosh can give XD
Well, despite seeing the big mac tag and the comments. I'm going to hope this turns out with spike showing velvet that she's still got her whole life ahead of her.
By turning her into a pile of utterly pleasured pony.
You have my attention. do go on.
2904118
Yes, Spike will have his turn as well. Although we all know who his heart really belongs to.
Although Big Mac, Aloe and Lotus will make appearances soon, they are really meant more as placeholders for any number of stallions/mares that are lesser known characters. But there's only so many tags one can put on a story. I won't spoil who else will make guest appearances, but I'll say this much: It's not just ponies who can't resist Velvet's charmes.
Chapter 1 is currently in the process of being rewritten and purged of spelling errors and will be posted later today.
Ooh!
I like where this is going!
Oh boy, here we go.
I have to ask, will Night Light be making any appearances? Is there going to be any confrontation between him and Velvet due to her doing Ponyville? I'm a sucker for that kind of drama.
Spike is really that naive that he believes Twilight when she told him M means 'Mares Only'? I see yet another story with Spike being shat on. Everybody knows M means 'The Good Stuff'
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Probably, but that'll have to wait for the later chapters. There's a lot of other stuff I've planned for now.
Ok. I gave it a read and I like what I read so far.
You have my interest.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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She told him when he was a lot younger I would guess, so yeah, he probably was that naive as a kid. That particular ruse is probably not going to last much longer though.
...Sylph, can you please seperate these words for me, I am no good with inserting spaces.
This is the moment when you realize I am a total fan boy.
What do you mean?
I deciphered this perfectly the first time I was reading it...I spend way too much time with Kier,
Now THAT I agree with you on.
~Sylpheed and Eli
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Rated TGS.
2905533
Silly person. Everyone knows that "M" stands for "My, that's some really steamy sex!"