Twilight Velvet, in her time a famed romance novelist, visits her daughter in Ponyville to finish her latest work. Will her romantic encounters give her the inspiration she needs?
Just then something happened, a brilliant beam of multicolored light came out of the sky and engulfed the six ponies plus one dragon. “What?” Imago growled as his attack was deflected by the rainbow of light.
Deus Ex Machina
“...Passion,” Velvet finished and a brilliant beam of white light burst forth from the Princess of Magic and hit her mother. The writer could feel herself being lifted up into the air. Her shoulders burned as two wings sprouted on her back and the cool touch of gilded steel pressed in on her skin as she was encased in ancient Armour much like the ones the pegasi of old wore before the unification.
sarabynoe.files.wordpress.com/2013/04/bitch-say-what.gif?w=620 Also earlier in this chapter you noted that Twilight Velvet took off her clothes to save twilight, not only was it all for nothing sense the terrible changeling OC didn't even tell her about it. Also Velvet is still naked later in this seen and I can't Imagine rusty iron armor feels good against bear skin. All in all I am starting to not like this story even more. My statement still stands that yo should work on quality then quantity.
However I can't shake the feeling that I like this story, my mind's telling me no, but my body says yes.
This is a surprisingly great plot twist. (Also, I felt like I should have commented that in the last chapter, but I was trying to finish this story tonight.)
liked it.
Deus Ex Machina
sarabynoe.files.wordpress.com/2013/04/bitch-say-what.gif?w=620
Also earlier in this chapter you noted that Twilight Velvet took off her clothes to save twilight, not only was it all for nothing sense the terrible changeling OC didn't even tell her about it. Also Velvet is still naked later in this seen and I can't Imagine rusty iron armor feels good against bear skin.
All in all I am starting to not like this story even more. My statement still stands that yo should work on quality then quantity.
However I can't shake the feeling that I like this story, my mind's telling me no, but my body says yes.
Love this story and chapter but I have to say that this was soo corny that there was popcorn kernels flying out of my monitor.
It was a nice snack.
Laughed uncontrollably when she grew armor.
Ugh, elements and new harmony bearers are so overdone as hell and totally an easy way to defeat the villain.
Eh, I still liked it, Deus Ex Machina or not.
Really Rainbow Spike fadom of Spike every were hate you now
I still found it entertaining. Besides, the entirely of the story so far has been awesome. A small bit of Deus ex won't change that for me.
Now this chapter in short: A Dark Souls Boss fight
first off i called it about Imalgo being the asshole spy, second VALKYRIE TWILIGHT VELVET FOR THE WIN, YEAH!!! they really need a snowflake emoticon
So...A princess was kidnapped? That's the most original plot I ever heard. Isn't that right, Mario?
As soon as I read the part with the sword and spear I thought, "Welcome back, to the stage of history!"
Oi u f00kin w0t m8?
seriously though, this was an unbelievably terrible (if unintentional) way to phrase this.
This is a surprisingly great plot twist. (Also, I felt like I should have commented that in the last chapter, but I was trying to finish this story tonight.)
2995525 And Twilight Velvet is one helluva Boss.
FUICKING RADIOACTIVE RAINBOW HYPE(R) BEAMS ARE SPEWING OUT OF DICK!(NOT ejaculating, just really super hype)
I-I...I can't, I can't do it this was too much.