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I have to say this was actually quite cute.
What a weird thing to say about a clopfic (and foals no less).
Mmmmm!
Not bad! Not bad at all!
That was short.
Not bad, but short.
Still. I enjoyed it.
~Skeeter The Lurker
There are not enough stories about little fillies, on this webpage. Thank you for increasing the amount of them, at least just by a little bit.
it's about fucking time I see this paring
I was beginning to think I was crazy for hoping for a Sliver Bloom story. That makes it okay in my book.
boooo, you stink. No back story, no lead up, no fun.
Only part worth anything is the other cmc's remarks at the end, I lold. BUT THAT"S IT!
Also if your purpose was just to write a clop scene then why even give a description of the story? why not just let people know "A short clop scene of Silver Spoon and Applebloom, nothing spectacular"? I suppose that is what annoys me the most, you wrote a more intriguing description then a story and that's just misleading.
3131023 I still got you to lol
otherwise thanks for the feedback! 
3134007 indeed you did. well played good sir or madam
*Thinks about whether or not to accept this* Hmm....I SHALL ACCEPT IT! *Likes and favorites the story* You Sir/Madam, have earned a follower
Boo, more description... You still got a favorite
2938487 yeah there needs to be more
I request that you write more such stories
so I'm assuming her glasses were "missing" having been knocked off her face? because you never actually tell us what's missing.
OH and you mention Silver and Bloom walk for almost a half hour to the clubhouse. At the same time Scootaloo and Sweetie are giving Cheerilee excuses for Bloom's absence. Yet at the end the two are right outside the clubhouse spying on Silver and Bloom.
1. why would Cheerilee dismiss Sweete and Scoots?
2. How did they get from the schoolhouse to the clubhouse in the maybe 15 to 20min that it took for Silver and Bloom to get each other off?
two minor details that could be explained by a mentioning of the passage of time between when Silver and Bloom fell asleep together and when Scoots and Sweetie showed up at their window. HOWEVER if indeed the school day passed while the lovers were napping then Scootaloo and Sweetie would only catch them napping. They would witness nothing more. However since no passage of time was mentioned it looks like they sat outside and watched them have sex from the beginning, which would be physically impossible short of Sweetie Belle teleporting herself and Scoots from the school to the club house.
Otherwise it is a short and sweet little love scene between Silver and Bloom. It's a rare ship but a beautiful one.
Well, obviously.