Rescue from the Changeling Hive

When Discord invited Princess Celestia to his new home, he believed he was going to introduce her to his daughter, Screwball. Instead, they both make a horrifying discovery, one which forces Discord to infiltrate the infamous Changeling Hive. Can Discord survive the changelings and rescue his beloved daughter from the clutches of Queen Chrysalis?

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Chapter 1: The Discovery · 19th Jul 2013 · 2,505 words
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Chapter 2: The Truth · 22nd Jul 2013 · 2,395 words
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Chapter 3: Support · 27th Jul 2013 · 3,515 words
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Chapter 4: Infiltration · 2nd Aug 2013 · 4,055 words
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Chapter 5: Caught · 9th Aug 2013 · 4,940 words
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Chapter 6: Hope · 16th Aug 2013 · 4,013 words
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Chapter 7: Second Chance · 23rd Aug 2013 · 3,830 words
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Chapter 8: Rescue · 30th Aug 2013 · 4,283 words
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Chapter 9: Confrontation · 6th Sep 2013 · 6,176 words
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Epilogue · 13th Sep 2013 · 1,708 words
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Iamsorry

Iamsorry #1 · Jul 19th, 2013 · 1 · · Chapter 1: The Discovery ·

i hate you!
why must you end it like THAT?! i mean i was like oooh i wonder what will----its over D:
i hate cliff hangers! please continue this! im dieing to see the next chapter now! :D

Changeling-Drone

Changeling-Drone #2 · Jul 21st, 2013 · · · Chapter 1: The Discovery ·

I hope dear screwball is ok, she is so cute

Iamsorry

Iamsorry #3 · Jul 22nd, 2013 · · · Chapter 2: The Truth ·

another cliff hanger! XD
OK this series is different but i actually like the idea, they had poked the side of a mighty beast and failed to run and i cant wait to see what happens next.

Diamond Sparkle

Diamond Sparkle #4 · Jul 23rd, 2013 · · · Chapter 2: The Truth ·

They'll regret it when Discord brings chaos to their Hive.

Kittamaru

Kittamaru #5 · Jul 27th, 2013 · · · Chapter 3: Support ·

The suspense is killer!

Iamsorry

Iamsorry #6 · Jul 29th, 2013 · · · Chapter 3: Support ·

oooh i actually feel sorry for the changelings D:
i really wonder what will happen to them

Iamsorry

Iamsorry #7 · Aug 3rd, 2013 · · · Chapter 4: Infiltration ·

wow this is getting really good!
i really want to see the fate of the changelings though! X3

Diamond Sparkle

Diamond Sparkle #8 · Aug 3rd, 2013 · · · Chapter 4: Infiltration ·

Poor Screwball.

Changeling-Drone

Changeling-Drone #9 · Aug 9th, 2013 · 1 · · Chapter 5: Caught ·

poor poor changelings discord is essentially is chaos is head can still let chaos out for he has ears a nose and a mouth for it to flow out even as a statue he can do a little chaos and very few spells are permanent just keeping him like that will sap most of her power

also couldnt discord use his magic to teleport screwball to celestia?

Changeling-Drone

Changeling-Drone #10 · Aug 16th, 2013 · · · Chapter 6: Hope ·

celestia never split the party and you could have brought THE ELEMENTS

Iamsorry

Iamsorry #11 · Aug 28th, 2013 · · · Chapter 7: Second Chance ·

im seriously liking this story
i just hope the changelings will be ok D:

Iamsorry

Iamsorry #12 · Sep 1st, 2013 · · · Chapter 8: Rescue ·

oooh this is getting really good i wonder who will win the changelings or the Eqestrians, and if so what will happen to the loser? extinction?

bahatumay

bahatumay #13 · Sep 7th, 2013 · · · Chapter 9: Confrontation ·

Now this is the Discord I've been waiting to see!

Ellington

Ellington #14 · Oct 13th, 2013 · · · Chapter 2: The Truth ·

Wow, talk about biting off more than you can chew Chrysalis.

Ellington

Ellington #15 · Oct 14th, 2013 · · · Chapter 6: Hope ·

Question: Why do you keep calling Discord a chimera?

EKessler

EKessler #16 · Oct 14th, 2013 · · · Epilogue ·

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It refers to mythical creatures composed of parts of various animals. I also think it's fun to say.

Iamsorry

Iamsorry #17 · Apr 17th, 2014 · · · Epilogue ·

ok i really really liked this story i just wonder if anything will happen next! like maybe a sequel X3
but it was fun to read and well written for a first timer but i'll be lieing if i say i didn't feel sorry for the changelings X3

machstormer

machstormer #18 · May 1st, 2015 · · · Epilogue ·

GREAT WORK!
This was your first?
WOW!
I hope you plan on a sequel, this was AWESOME!

erictheblue

erictheblue #19 · Apr 15th, 2017 · · · Chapter 9: Confrontation ·

"You heard me! Let her go!"
That male voice came from her right. So familiar, she thought. There was nothing there, though, nothing but her own shadow.
And it waved at her.

one of my all-time favorite lines!

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron #20 · Jun 14th, 2018 · · · Chapter 1: The Discovery ·

"With gusto." He then lowered himself down to the bed and began to gently nudge the filly. "Screwball. Wake up, sweetie." The filly in bed began to stir, quietly sneezing as she did. As her eyes cracked open, Celestia was immediately drawn to them, noticing the swirling purple pupils that dotted them. She was Discord's daughter all right.

Eeyup.

Mouth agape, her shocked eyes were locked firmly on Screwball, never moving away. Screwball, on the other hoof, was shifting nervously, avoiding eye contact with either of them.

What’s going on?

"No! Don't…" Screwball's protests were cut short once more, as a wave of magic from Celestia's horn pulsed through her, holding her in place as it worked its way through her. After no more than a few moments, the magic took its effect. From Screwball's legs, a rough halo of green light formed at her back hooves and slowly worked its way over her body. As it did, her features changed. Starting at her hooves, her dark-pink fur turned to pitch-black skin, filled with empty holes. As it went over her torso, it revealed a smooth black exoskeleton, a couple of insect-like wings adorning the back. Then, it went over her head, completing the transformation. Discord gaped in horror at the revelation. In bed, where his pony daughter should have laid, was a changeling.

No......NO SCREWBALL!