• Published 19th Jul 2013
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My Little Puggy - DarthWill3



Rainbow Dash has rescued 4 pug puppies from the river, but she can't keep or get rid of them. They need a home. Which pony should she ask to take care of the little angels?

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Epilogue

Dear Princess Celestia,
I’ve learned how important it is to go to the right friend for help. You might think that they might be having enough work to do, but they’re the only realistic choice you’ve got. You should expect that there are no limits to someone as experienced with animals as Fluttershy. Even if she’s beginning to stand for herself, she’ll always be there whenever you need a favor.
From now on, I’ll try not to waver away from the obvious again.
Signed,
Rainbow Dash


The following early afternoon, Rainbow, Rarity, Applejack, Twilight, and Fluttershy were at the park, talking about the two days of events. Pinkie Pie was running a little late, but the others didn’t mind. They knew she would make it before the picnic was over.

Not far away, the Cutie Mark Crusaders—Sweetie Belle, Apple Bloom, and Scootaloo—and Pipsqueak from Trottingham were playing with the Wonder Pugs. Apple Bloom tagged along with Fleetfoot; Sweetie Belle, Soarin; Pipsqueak, Rapidfire; and Scootaloo, Spitfire. Every time each foal caught up with their puppy, they would be outsmarted, lose sight of them, and before they knew it, be knocked down and licked before resuming their games. Tank made sure that they were playing safe. It wasn’t long before he got his share of kisses, too.

Rainbow watched the activity from the spot she was sitting. She couldn’t be any prouder of the Wonder Pugs. It was good to have them around kids, teaching them the values of having a pet in the future.

Just then, Pinkie rushed in with a copy of the Foal Free Press, looking very excited. “Hey, Rainbow Dash!” she exclaimed. “Wonder Pugs! Looky here! You’ve made the front page!”

Pinkie’s words reached the foals and yipping Wonder Pugs, causing them to speed right over to read.

“Huh?” asked Rainbow, raising an eyebrow. “What are you talking about?”

“It’s right over here,” smiled Pinkie, showing the front page to her friend.

Rainbow took the paper and was surprised find a photograph of her being kissed by the Wonder Pugs at the scene where she rescued them. Underneath read: Photo taken by: Scootaloo.

Rainbow gave a glance at the little orange Pegasus filly, who smiled with pride at her accomplishment. Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom joined in.

Seconds later, Rainbow found out why all the extra beaming. The story she read was even more of a shocker.
MY LITTLE PUGGY: Rainbow Dash Saves Puppies.
Written by: Gabby Gums.
Two days ago, last Saturday, the one and only Rainbow Dash was seen rescuing four tiny little pug puppies—all reaching 6 weeks old, according to some delivery papers—that were stuffed into a sack and happened to have fallen over the Ponyville Bridge, into Saddle Lake. The splash was heard only about five yards away from the photographer.

Shortly after, Rainbow Dash christened the puppies as “Wonder Pugs,” each giving a name of a few famous Wonderbolts: Spitfire, Rapidfire, Soarin’, and Fleetfoot. With the assistance of her trusty tortoise, Tank, she was able to find shelter for the night at Sweet Apple Acres and devotedly stayed in the little rascals’ company. The Wonder Pugs are now living in the cottage of the ever lovable Miss Fluttershy, as confirmed yesterday by Miss Applejack. The other eyewitnesses will questioned for details for their encounters with such loving little angels.

As to the nature of how the Wonder Pugs fell overboard, police officers reported seeing this town’s dangerous and least reliable mailpony, Miss Derpy Hooves, absentmindedly placing the sack on the left side of the bridge and leaving it there while finding lunch. The puppies were meant to be delivered to the Animal Shelter, her papers read, until a suitable owner could be found. As usual, those very officers arrested her shortly after she ate. It was fortunate that Rainbow Dash came to the rescue; otherwise, Miss Hooves would have been held at the police station for neglect of duty.

Rainbow lowered the paper to show her look of contempt so that everypony could see. “I guess we found out who that nut is,” she sighed. “A very careless nut, if you ask me.”

“Oh, come now, Rainbow Dash,” protested Rarity. “From what we know of Derpy, ‘careless’ would be putting it mildly.

“Still,” said Rainbow, “it’s nice to see the Wonder Pugs have their first picture taken.”

“And we have you girls to thank for it,” Twilight pointed out to the CMC, making them blush.

As Pipsqueak read the article, he exclaimed, “Wow! Keep this up, Sweetie Belle, and you’ll be editor-in-chief for sure!”

Sweetie Belle’s face turned redder than Scootaloo and Apple Bloom’s altogether. She gave out a sheepish giggle before replying, “Oh, um… Thanks, Pipsqueak.”

“So do you think you can all give us more details on what happened with the Wonder Pugs days ago?” asked Scootaloo.

“We already got the stories at Sweet Apple Acres and the Carousel Boutique,” confirmed Apple Bloom. “Ah reckon all we need is the whole shebang! Well, all that you have to say,” she added. “Don’t wanna make a scandal or anythin’.”

“Okey dokey lokey!” chirped Pinkie.

“Sure,” said Fluttershy, quietly.

“Absolutely,” agreed Twilight.

“Y’all got it,” Applejack affirmed.

“Ask away, darlings,” lavished Rarity.

Rainbow looked back at the paper and reread the headline. “Hey,” she chuckled, “look at that: ‘My Little Puggy.' That sounds… pretty cute.

Then, the whole world stopped at once. Rainbow felt emptiness for a few seconds. Then, she realized what had happened and saw everypony else staring at her, their expressions blank. Even Tank was surprised. The Wonder Pugs, on the other hand, just smiled and panted, unaware of their rescuer’s reputation whatsoever.

Feeling her cheeks go warm, Rainbow finally asked, “I didn’t just say that… did I?”

There was another pause. And then, everypony laughed out of control. All the Wonder Pugs jumped at Rainbow and kissed her all over.

Maybe, thought Rainbow, as the puppies’ tongues made contact with her face, “cute” isn’t such a bad thing, after all.

Author's Note:

A letter to the Princess always helps to end a story like this.

Having the Cutie Mark Crusaders and Pipsqueak play with the Wonder Pugs seems natural. And Tank makes a good referee.

For once, Gabby Gums says something right about a story. Scootaloo adding that picture really helps lighten the article.

Not only is Derpy Hooves responsible for the pugs falling overboard, but that incident also gets her in trouble with the police.

I've figured I'd show little bit of PipBelle in this epilogue. Pipsqueak and Sweetie Belle make a cute foal couple.

Dashie finally learns that "cute" can work in her way of life. Helps to show her soft side.

Comments ( 46 )

>Milo and Otis references
I'm going to read the fuck out of this story.

Comment posted by DarthWill3 deleted Jul 19th, 2013

2902137

You watch your language! :twilightangry2:

Anyway, thanks! Be sure to comment on each chapter. :yay:

Omg I loved this so much :rainbowkiss:

2902859
Thank you very much! :yay:

Incredible nice story :pinkiehappy:

*Awaits more such storys from you (Happy, Rd maincharacter, and so on) :rainbowdetermined2:*

2903102
Thanks a lot. Don't you just love pug puppies? :pinkiesmile:

2903163
Well, Dashie will be one of the main characters in my next stories. :raritywink:

That's so cute. This was great.

Hey a Pug is a British dog right?

2903235
Actually, they originated in China, but Queen Victoria keep a pug.

2903223
Thank you very much! What are you favorite parts?

2903408 I like how Rainbow got attached to them, as well as the part where it goes to the point of view of the Wonderpups and Opalenence.

2903433
Well, Dashie's not the only character with a view. :raritywink:

Now THIS looks familiar...

2911683
It sure is, old friend. :raritywink:

2966150
You've got that right, pal. :raritywink:

2966179
I concur. :twilightsmile:
Why thanks. I'd like to help move things along for my readers. :pinkiehappy:

3146314
Really now? Is there a fanfic on that? ::twilightsmile:

I finally took the time to read this since I had some spare time. Wow, what a very well written piece of work that you have made. I really enjoyed the use of italics letters in the story. I can only imagine how much time and work that took because I wrote a fiction where quite a few words were in colors and that took me about an hour to do. The italics really helped me feel that the words were being spoken in a sharper tone of voice and it made the story much more enjoyable.

Of course. I loved that you referenced my most favorite ship of all time. Soarin' and Dash. I like how you mention things from previous MLP stories and you seem to know much about this show like for example....you mentioned the line that Rainbow says in your story that came from that episode where Fluttershy keeps saying "Bite off more than I can chew." Many things like that made me happy when I read this story.

The ending was golden, but poor Derpy. She's not crazy...just a little on the Derp side. I can't imagine how she still has a delivery job when the law officials are constantly watching her like you said in your story. :derpytongue2:

Anyway, great job. Well written, and I hope you continue to write. The author's notes were very entertaining to read under each chapter as well. :twilightsmile:

3150691
Why, thank you! :pinkiehappy:
Italics always help you along the way. :twilightsmile:
SoarinDash are a cute couple, I won't deny. And it's always good to look back at the past. :heart: :twilightsmile:
Well, nopony wanted to have Derpy cause trouble again. :rainbowlaugh:
Thank you very much.
What do you think of the Wonder Pugs?

3153314 I thought they were adorable. I realized that you must have given Rapidfire a made up color because there is never an appearance or any descriptions about him in the show. He is only mentioned. The pugs were adorable and made many D'awwww inducing moments.

3153343
I'm glad to hear you say that.
For Rapidfire, it was a lucky guess. :twilightblush:

That was great, this should be an episode. (I am guessing that this fan fiction's cover pic is the one that "Tabby Gums" took.)

3407142
Aw, thanks! I totally agree with you! Why not contact The Hub in my place? :twilightsmile:
That's "Gabby Gums" and yes, I suppose that would be the case. :pinkiesmile:

To be honest, I don't like dogs much.
But this looks too cute to not read.

3451258
Aw, thanks! What are your favorite parts so far in each chapter?

3453654
I honestly haven't read too far, sorry~!
I'm too swamped with Homework, but I will get around to reading all of it.

i will read thins one day in a few weeks when im on my vacation and im board at the hoteal but there is one thing i wanna say about this PUGGGYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MY FAV DOG!!!!!!!!!!!!:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

3696769 Aw... Glad to hear you say that! Be sure to comment inside each chapter. :twilightsmile:

5375272 - Yeah. Was weird, but rather funny.

5375821 Well, thank you for reading this story! I hope you've enjoyed it! :twilightsmile:

5378807 - Your welcome. Any chance of a sequel with grown-up Wonder Pugs? I'd be interested to see if anyone adopted them if they did not remain permanently with Fluttershy. In Filli Vanilli many of her animals were adopted.

5379064 Probably not, but I was kinda thinking of an Equestria Girls story with the Wonder Pugs. Give Sunset a little puppy play time. :twilightsmile:

5384224 - That might prove to be an interesting story.

Super cute! Love it!:twilightsmile:

6198721 Thank you so much!

This was a sweet story, added straight to favourites. :rainbowkiss:

6695710 Thanks! Glad to know you've enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

If you like pugs here are 3 videos of them!

7356774 I've watched them. Too cute! :twilightsmile:

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