Midnight Guardian: Equestrian Operator

Luna goes on a quest to discover Midnight Guardian's past. She looks through history to find the answers to all of her questions. Most importantly, who is Midnight Guardian?

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King of blades

King of blades #1 · Jul 22nd, 2013 · · · Back to Basics ·

Props to you, dude. I love these dark fics, and I can see HUGE potential in this. This is moving much slower than your other story, and I gotta say I think I like it better because of that. One question though, have you thought about ringing part of this into Luna's Boredom Cure? Like maybe vinyl would blunder in on Luna, and activate one of the crystals or something?

Broniesrponies2

Broniesrponies2 #2 · Jul 22nd, 2013 · 1 · · Back to Basics ·

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The pacing has to be slower so that I can put 3-4 chapter sessions in the space between 1-2-3 chapters of Luna's Boredom Cure. To keep you knowledgeable of where this story is in relation to Luna's Boredom Cure, my plan is to say which chapter Luna's searching begins in and then mention that whatever chapter is the final chapter of that session with Luna. Its more complicated than that really but this comment is about to get really long.
I don't see Vinyl activating a crystal, but I could see Vinyl walking in on Luna while she is using a crystal. God, I make it sound like pony drugs XD.
Anyway, I might do that. It is a good idea. My only problem is Vinyl keeping secrets. She drinks a lot (in this Equestria anyway) and not many people keep secrets when drunk unless they aren't asked direct questions. Octavia is exactly the kind of pony who asks those kinds of questions. Luna is going to be a bit more respectful to Midnight in Luna's Boredom Cure and will find reasons to give him nights off so that she can look into his past more. And I just thought of how to keep Vinyl's mouth shut. Find out in 2 maybe three chapters.
Most importantly, I'm glad that you're enjoying it.

King of blades

King of blades #3 · Aug 9th, 2013 · · · Back to Basics ·

Am I the only one who misses this fic? Will you be updating this soon? Or after you finish one of the others?

Broniesrponies2

Broniesrponies2 #4 · Aug 9th, 2013 · · · Back to Basics ·

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After an update to A Lost Soul, then one to LBC, this is getting an update. I'm sorry everyone, this story has not been forgotten. I just haven't had much time for writing.

Musical Clyde