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You're missing punctuation in a lot of places, but overall this story was nice. Upvote from me, and I'll shove it in some groups so it can get a few more readers.
*sobs* I didn't it was a sad fic! =T^T=
When I heard a character say "jiggie with it", I couldn't stop thinking of Men In Black. Let me just say how much I really like the character name in this story, because I really do. Anyway, you do have a few grammar errors. Please forgive me as I try to sound more intelligent than I am, and say things I was told myself. *ahem* The character of Helga was a bit lacking in detail. She did bad things, and I don't know why, and if your answer is "because shes evil" I'm just going to say nothing.
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I know I didn't develop her character very much, I was mainly using her as a reason for them to leave. In this next chapter and on out we won't be hearing from her again.
I'm sorry 2903359 I may have told you a lie before because with what I have planed for chapter eight we're going to be having a flashback to the times in the orphanage.
Sorry for the misinformation, I'm kinda making this up as I go along with only a vague direction in mind.