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TheIceManCometh


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For me, the main draw of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic is the characters. In the show, the main characters are given plenty of characterization by the many episodes that depict their personalities, skills, faults, and the triumph of their faults. There are two characters, however, that I feel were not given this proper treatment. They either suffer from a lack of characterization and flaws that humanize, or ponyize, them (Celestia), or they suffer just from a lack of screen time (Luna). The fact that MLP is a show geared towards kids also holds it back from showing more complex and darker themes of human nature. This is subjective, however, so you may feel differently. In any case, this is my attempt to expand on the MLP lore, to delve into more dark themes that the show simply cannot do, and mainly to show the events that impact Celestia and Luna's relationship before and after Luna's inevitable imprisonment.

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Mm a very good story indeed I'll be happily waiting for more :)

Truly wonderful. I love the ending and how it all nicely rolls up into it. The story sounds a lot like what happens to Luna which I can see the reason why that would be Luna's favorite story. Over all awesome work. Keep it up!

Oh wait its complete lol I should really read if its complete or not
well its still a really good story short but interesting and very good :D

2876771 To be honest there was more but i have procrastination issues so I didn't finish it. I did want to release some of it however, so I just released the first chapter.

Decided to release another chapter and hopefully I'll be able to finish it. This is going to be a pretty long story so there may be spelling/grammar mistakes in it. Also, I only have a general idea of what will actually happen so bare with me as I make the necessary adjustments to the description/picture. There shouldn't be any edits to the actual chapters unless of course its spelling/grammar related.

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