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Tomsketchit


I am a writer dabbling in many genres. I only write what I love, and can only hope for others to love it the same. This is usually no the case.

Comments ( 15 )

Whatever you do, don't stare at the cover image too closely, especially not when you're tired. I did, and it looked as if it were moving, swaying... Creepy...

Awwww there are only two parts? Oh well, it's a wonderful read anyway.
:moustache:

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Thank you. Although, technically there are three. Two different endings! :ajsmug:
And also, I have other plans for the Abominations. This is just how I am introducing them. I have a prequel and several sequel-ish things in mind for this. So... just wait and see! :trollestia:

I like it Sketch. I ran into a hiccup or two, just sentence that read weird to me, but overall it was good

I get it 3 mustache (Because I can't give 3.5)
:moustache::moustache::moustache:

I'm not an actual fan of dark and horror stories but the premise of Lovecraftian story was stronger than me. And I must say I don't regret reading. I especially liked Olive's moral struggle when she was offered power.

I can't wait to see the rest of this story.

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Oh, and about that emotional struggle...
Let's just say...
Remember how I said there would be two endings?
Enough said.

3242434 Now which one do you see as good one :trollestia:

3242444
That my dear reader is for YOU to decide, once I get them up.
I'm not too terribly focused on this story, as dear to my heart as it is, due to the lack of attention it's received. You are probably one of the first people in months to give this story a glance.

3242452 well the groups work in mysterious ways (although not for me so far). But this story deserves much more attention than it is getting,

3242463
Thank you.
And I've decided to let one more piece of info slip, nothing major, spoiler type, but still something.
The difference in the beginnings of each alternate ending is whether or not she tries to escape.
And now I feel I've said too much.
I must go before they come for me.
OH SWEET CELESTIA THEY'RE HE-

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3242473 I wouldn't say it is too much. I have several scenarios of how both endings could progress running in my head now so you definitely haven't lost my interest. :raritystarry:

You guys just LOVE letting the villains win ALL the damn time don't you? Jesus.....:ajbemused:

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There are going to be two endings. A 'good' one and a 'bad' one. In neither does the villain here actually succeed. Unfortunately I've been busy with several other projects, as well as college and a full time job, so I've put off writing either of these possible endings. But then again, you also have to consider the fact that this is a Lovecraftian Horror story. Meaning that things are basically guaranteed to end badly for the protagonist.

Well at least be knows the best mix of that song. Now to read it...

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