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How powerful is an Alicorn?
Rumours say that ponies that become alicorns have unmatched power. But some say they are exactly the same as how they were before they transcended into power.
Ponies say that the Elements of Harmony are the most powerful creation in the world. and nothing can surpass their power. But what happens when this power isn't available?
Princess Luna soon soon puts that theory to the test when a mechanical being enters the world of Equestria.

This is a Oneshot, not a series.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 34 )

the movie was scmeh but this was good

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One of the issues I had with the movie was how freakishly overpowered Zod's Girlfriend/minion/wife/whatever :ajbemused:
I mean, I understand how yellow sun Makes Kryptonians tough
But this chick was just.... Damn....
I expected a movie about Supes vs Zod, not Faiora vs the world

2855196 First off
KNEEEELLLL
and second they just make him seem more of a drama queen now I know he is supposed to save everyone but come on

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True, they did make him kind of a drama queen but he was cool nonetheless
and i will NEVER kneel! :flutterrage:

I am disappointed at the lack of Soundwave in this fic.

The fight scenes were nicely choreographed and detailed.

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He was mentioned....:fluttershyouch:

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NEVER!

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Thank you good sir :twilightsmile:

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Yet he never physically appears, which is understandable since he can lolstomp Equestria by himself in a manner of days.

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But he's there... Watching... Waiting for the right moment to strike.

So.........

Are Celeatia and Luna dead?

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...... Knew I forgot something...
Hold on, let me just write this Epilogue here :twilightsheepish:

For me man of steel had grea action scenes but very little character development. I would give from a range of 5.9 to 7.1 out of 10.

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You haven't answered my question yet •_•

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Shush I got distracted when I was writing it.... :twilightsheepish:
No they're not dead. Luna just passed out because she used up all her mana
Celestia's technically on the brink of life and death.
And Twilight's on the same boat as Celestia.

No ponies were harmed in the making of this story :twilightsmile:
[Minus everyone that dies in Canterlot and Ponyville *cough*]

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So.... Lets do a head count

Ponyville: Mayor Mare, Lyra, Bon Bon, Berry Punch, Diamond Tiara, Silver Spoon, The Apple Family( Granny Smith Applebloom Big Mac) Miss Cherrili and Carrot Top.

Status: All Deceased

Canterlot: all the Royal Guard Prince, Blueblood, Fancy Pants, Wild Fire

Status: All cut in half or in more slit pecies

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See when you put it that way....:twilightsheepish:
EDIT: I'm just going to clarify most things in this Epilogue here... Because when you put it that way...

Here's my feedback: SEQUAL!!! But this time with both Autobots and Decepticons (bring Megatron back to life as Galvatron).

WHO'S WITH ME!?!?

SOUNDWAVEEEE!!!!!

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Kind of ruining the ending of the previous chapter...anyway:
Will this be like the Near-Curbstomp of the previous chapter or will it go diffrently?

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I was asking about the Cliffhanger hinting a sequel:
Will it be another "Versus" fic again or will it be something different?

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Well right now I have to update my other story... But as for another verses story...
Versus huh? Sound catchy:moustache:
Anyways I don't know... This was just something that was in my head for a bit so I just typed it out and posted it by accident [Cousin posted it so I just let it slide... now if he was older...]
But yeah, I don't know. Like you said, its open for a sequel but I don't know what to do...
I've already destroyed part of Equestria and the moon, so I think some recovery time is in order :twilightsheepish:

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I'm pretty sure at that time,Soundwave would have everyone by the strings..now all it needs is a push:pinkiecrazy:

Well,anyway I do hope you'll be able finish whatever you're working on.
P.S SLEEP IS FOR THE WEAK:trollestia:

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I'm not weak! I AM STRONG!:flutterrage:

I would have been happy if Cadence died.

I dislike her the most

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But she's the alicorn of love... or something...
You can't hate on her :twilightsheepish:

Soundwave:facehoof: I like Soundwave he's a badass!!! He may keep to his position of "Yes Man" but if he wanted to, could trounce Megatron any day of the week. and then over the combined might of Autobot and Decepticon

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Yes bring Grimlock and the famous lightning strike force the ..... Dinobots.

The two soon pushed away from each other. They store at each other for what felt like hours before clashing again. The impact cracked the ground below.

Shouldn't that be Starred?

Celestia began to want off, leaving the young Alicorn with a smile on her face.

Found another one, I could be wrong, but shouldn't this be "wander" instead of want?

2931590 was that king sombra in front of soundwave

“Will she manage?”

The sun mare knew she wouldn't.

Wow you have so much faith in Twilight don't you Celestia...

to think that the moon has a chance to win is ridiculous and ridiculous

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