My name's PJ. I'm from New York. I write pony fics. I go to parties with bronies. I'm not good at self-introduction.
When the Equestrian border is crossed by murderous enemies, it's up to Princess Luna to organize the defense. But the invaders have the magical ability to disguise themselves as the loved ones of the native ponies, and they are led by a demon bent on destruction. Can the love of the two sisters save Equestria?
(This was my February Write-off entry, and you might have read it there, but I've since revised it to change the name of the town and break it up into chapters.)
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I know the author can't read this but this is really good, no this is amazing
There are some dubious word choices which really knocked me out of my suspension of disbelief, and a few typos, but overall that's a spectacular story. Excellent work.
I'm sorry but 'rape our land' and 'You will no longer molest our homes!'?
I know this is a very sad story but I lost it.
This is a very sad story.
I'm really glad you had capitalized the times when Luna refers herself as 'We', 'Us', and 'Our'.
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Well, I was trying to write in a very old-fashioned style, and those words didn't have the dirty context then that they do now. I guess I should focus on my real talent: comedy!
(why no Apple Bloom smiley?)
Changelings........before they were cannon haha.
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wow just wow
I am going to guess Taur is from Taurtus *snickers*puns glorious puns
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Noooooooooooo! But she lives and will kill him. But Luna wasn't seen as an important and that led to help with nightmare moon yes? I will see soon enough
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Wow again. Ending the is good. I always thought Luna was well awsome, never stopped loving Celestia, ect. but for her too have that knowledge and not use it almost never well this is a concept that can be seen happening I believe at least.
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Thanks. I really feel this is my most underappreciated story. I wish more people would read it.
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If any asks for a good, probably never, I will shove this down their throat
I loved this story! Why is it not more popular? It was great and I really like how it was written!
It was heartwarming to read about the brave acts that so many ponies performed, even while in the midst of tragedy, and I kept thinking to myself, "this is what we are fighting for!"
And then the ending, making me struggle to decide between sacrificing lives or sacrificing strength... even if you did it with a deus ex machina, haha! 
It would be best to have the best of both worlds, though.
7861137 Thanks. This was one of my early stories, but I still think it's pretty good for what it is.