In the Everfree Forest, a creature of darkness is evoked. Alone an without guidance, it roams this strange world and stumbles upon a small town. It's presence here, however, doesn't stay hidden for long, as the rulers of Equestria do everything they can to locate it. Which means delegating it to their most capable individuals out there.
Meanwhile, Twilight isn't overjoyed that Ponyville is yet again visited by Discord. She already has enough trouble finding peace with her growing feelings for Rainbow Dash, so having to find a unknown creature with a strange conection to Celestia, Luna and Discord running wild and keeping a sharp eye on the fingers of a God of Chaos are sure to give her something to do.
Takes place between Games Ponies Play and Magic Mystery Cure. Because I like a good Discord and Twilicorn woudn't fit in my story concept. Even though I think it isn't that bad, I'll rewrite it as soon as I think of myself as a decent enough writer.
Thanks go to my proofreader TheShadow!
I'm going with nightmare creature, or the nightmare itself. either could fit
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Ya I didn't think of that, it maybe the nightmare that made nightmare moon.
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Interesting thoughts... but not what I had in mind. It will take a while until I clear that up anyway so you dont have to think to much in it unless like to make conspiracy therories...
At least he knows right from wrong and seems friendly.
I have not started reading but that pic reminds me of the guy upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/5/55/The_Guy_(Disturbed).png
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Well... I completely missed that...
Actually I like the band but this has nothing to with the guy on the picture. Except the face, of course.
3082282 well ok. But anyways got to reading it and I must say you have a well paced beginning and good writing, I will wait to see where this goes.
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It's always nice to get positive feedback.
I have never written something like that before, let alone in english so I really hope I'll improve my writing style over the time. And since it is supposed to be a pretty long story I also think that I'll be able to do so.
3084179 well I will be here reading you story so I will try to give insight on how you are doing.
Swag-tastic chapter, go on!
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I hate you...
It seems one of my awaited stories has updated on to the reading.
The little part of your brain that thinks it can write pinkie is
!!!!!!
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Nice to her that it was actually awaited and not forgotten... Fuck. Bad unintentional pun...
I hope you like it.
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I know, right? I just hope I didn't mess up her part too much. It's really hard to get in character with her and even if I manage it gives me headaches...
3277295 Perhaps I can be of assistance? People tell me I'm good at keeping them in character, so apparently I'm good at it
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It was mostly Pinkie Pie. She the most troublesome for me....
Maybe I'll get back to the offer sometime else, but right now, I'm pretty content with my proofreader.
fuck yeah! twidash for the win!
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I HAD to start somewhere, didn't I?
3413181 i just know that at some point, rarity has to start messing things up, but until that happens, i'm good.
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I intend to keep the 'messing up' to a minimum. I kinda agreed to make it a triangle like this:
I'm still working hard to find a way to do this without fucking it up. I just hope it works out somehow...
big smile on my face at the end thre.
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Still incomplete though...
I really hope that This doesnt become a love triangle... Then again I have no experience to speak from.
At least Rainbow got her $hit straight...
3635848 Reminds me of my own parents.
My answer to your question, dear author, is yes.
I read it for TEH ADVECHAH! as well as the fluffy feel good moments.
Like your version of the wonderbolts more than others I've read
Adventure is one thing but I came to get my twidash on
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I think you did alright with pinkie, you didn't go overboard like a lot of people do.
Really enjoying this.
and a typo.
You also managed to slip in an Ä, not sure if that was intentional.
This chapter has 666 views.
Same. I never come up with an exact plan, I just have a rough cut and improvise from there.
I read for both, really. You really are making this realistic as well, and I like that. Can't wait for the next chapter, even if this was last updated over a year ago. It's not canceled so I still have hope! Have a like and a fav, as well as a tracking!
6332763 That's cool. On Fanfiction I can't get more than 20. LOL!
So, um... What about the monster?
It just suddenly disappears?
Although it would be funny.