I get too many ideas. Mostly Femslash. Lots and lots of femslash.
Twilight Sparkle longs to get her name in the journals, to make some great advance in knowledge and prove she's not just her parent's daughter.
Shining wants to impress Twilight's boss.
Rainbow Dash just wants a whole heap of gold.
The mystery group of black clad warriors seem determined to stop them.
Just what have they got themselves into?
Action! Adventure! Romance!
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omg, another twidash from you? oh i hope so,
lets start the reading
edit1: and it's an adventure, omg
edit2: the prologue is awesome
Suck it skeeter
Suck it Skeeter
Suck it Skeeter.
Now that that's out of the way, time to read...
Suck it Skeeter
Let's read this!
Suck it Skeeter.
Now that I've actually read it, THE MUMMY!!!!!!! fjlkajdlsafhsuiybiosdybfiozsydot7ygzixbyd78o
Words cannot express how much I love this.
Dunno what's going on, but...
...suck it Skeeter
Looking forward to the next chapter
So… is "I got here before Skeeter" a thing now?
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Evidently? Huh. Who knew.
Suck it--- OW... Okay.. I'll stop.
Edit: Hmm. Interesting. You've earned a like and a fave. Definitely want to know where you're going with this.
Poor Skeeter.
I am glad the story is enjoyed and hey, only 5 dislikes! Don't know what those are about, could anyone make suggestions? If it is simple no-likey the Romance! or is it the fact I am inspired by an older film instead of a megaplex super shooty Sy Fy game? Ho hum.
More to come! More characters, more Adventure!
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You all are a bunch of smartasses. I approve.
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You're alright. Now. Incoming REAL comment when when I actually read the story and not look like a bloody moron for it.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Oh yes. This should be a good one...
~Skeeter The Lurker
It... Can't be...
It can't be...!
You... You got the idea... From...
The Motherfucking Mummy!!!!
I. Love. You. DO NOT let this stagnate, or I will never forgive you.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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Also: I must add I TOTALLY MADE
be BRENDAN FRASER 
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Niiiiice. I can see that.
Easily see that.
~Skeeter The Lurker
3053986 Luv ya buddy
The pacing seems to be going rather quick, I think.
Other than that, I'm enjoying following along this. Very easy to imagine each scene, indeed.
Suck it, guys!
~Skeeter The Lurker
i actually think it's going rather well. it keeps to the movies speed. i'd suggest a couple of slow paced chapters here and there to lengthen it a bit, but other than that i feel this is going rather well.
Oh, I have another two thousand words on the total I gave before, extended story during the "travel to the tomb" scene and extras to come! I just wanted to get the first bits out of the way.
3056872 *hugs*
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I'm not sure if actual compliment.. Either way, thank you Skeeter.
So far you play the characters well.
You could stand to slow it down a touch and pad it out, but that's just me.
~Skeeter The Lurker
What Skeeter said, and Twilight talks a bit too much like Rarity that it's a bit distracting.
Ooh! Are we gonna get the "I am a librarian" line?
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Hun, I started writing it for the "I'm a librarian line"
As for the speakings, I am trying to keep a little bit of the character in there from both source materials. I'll keep an eye open to check if it gets too bad.
Woooo updates!
Can't really say much to this one except, not bad at all.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Haha Bay Ardeth
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I thought of other anagrams but decided to stick with something simple.
Oh, and news for all, did you know that as of this moment I have 22k words written? I am really loving writing this one.
I'll read it later once I have my schoolwork done- but at
I couldn't help but think "Are you kidding? Fencing, fighting, torture, revenge, giants, monsters, chases, escapes, true love, miracles..."
CLIFFHANGER?!?!?
Oh well, I can wait.
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In true pulpy serial fashion, I do like to try andg give every chapter a Cliffhanger!
I saved this story for a while now and I must say it really is a great one. The human thing might not be everyones cup of tea but you do tell an ensnaring story, so I don't really mind.
It's also cool that you somehow kept the original capabilities of everyone and refined them to fit to the human forms.
That said, I'm looking forward to the grand finale and some more romance!
Weeeee!!! New Chapter!
Go get her Rainbow!
Before I start reading the actual story, I feel compelled to point out that the grammar error ("want's") in the description leaves a bad first impression of the quality of the writing.
Ah, you cut out the "had a very good time part, either way awesome, and glad the story is going it's own direction
Well, complete match won't work exactly becuase I wasn't planning on kiling off a good chunk of the cast and I had to fit in the ol' elements somehow.
I am glad it is still enjoyable.
Nice! Keep it up!
It's honestly amusing how you twist around the episode to fit it into the story. Just waiting for the moment when they realize that the elements are not the stones.
Ah! We are finally coming to a conclusion. And: YAY! FLUFF!
I suppose you will at least give us an epiloge? This chapter leaves some things unresolved...
3503189 I got a last little chapter and an epilogue to come, they will be posted both at the same time. Then I want to make some headway on my poor fics that stalled and then maybe some The Nightmare Returns!
sequel? do i smell a sequel?
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The Nightmare Returns
Coming just as soon as I have written it...
3518828 You shall receive all the... everything, you shall receive everything if you make a sequel.
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I got the bare bones in place and some text, some notes and a plotline. I do want to get plenty written before I publish.
Fezzes are cool. So is Pinkie Pie
Seems Cadence doesn't want Twi to go to Flare Prison, then again, I doubt she'd want her dead and she has to do stuff she doesn't like sometimes.
Luna, is Cadence's mom. Unexpected. Go on.
Choking Twi? Low blow Hoops...
I wonder, where IS Fluttershy? There has been nor hide nor hair of her so far...
And Mei is Fluttershy, why the name change though? No one else's name changed?