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2 people should NOT be speaking the same paragraph.
Aaand nope. I'm done.
If working on redoing a fic, please jusk try to not have same thing in two chapters, even if one is old and the other is not...
And please, if you're redoing a story do it quickly because anyone that reads it while it's being worked on is just going to be turned away because the story right now really gives an unginished feeling. Or you could jusy work on it the way so nothing overlaps in different chapter...
Anyway, it's a good story so a fav is going up, but I will not read any further than this, or for that matter, give a like, until the rework is done.
PS: I like the reworked version a lot more.
The concept of the story seems to be really interesting but Wind Strider is a perfect example for a bad OC, flat, uninteresting and boring.
I know it's been mentioned before and I know this 'Strider' is an important character but this is just too much.
I could not read this story for a period of time for that specific reason.
A lot you will probably read this and go "Then don't." I know.
I just enjoy the story but hearing about 'Strider' all the time was stressing me out.