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Damn. And I was hoping for happy stuff.
Well this is just....(punches wall)
Way to kick a stallion when he's down, dash.
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Well, she DID plan on doing that long before he wound up getting himself hurt as bad as he did. Can't really fault her for being fed up either, considering y'know....she's been bothered by this for quite some time. Distance sucks hard that way.
a bit cruel but... i love this shit... breaking up, loosing controll, overpowerment, coruption. its the dark side of live... not less tru
Well... That sucks... Poor Dashie and Strider
Some spelling errors towards the end.
"I-I'll just be back in....well just cal when you're done talking!"
cal should be call.
"You mean you wat to....break up....?"
wat should be want
Don't know if I was ninja'd on this, though.
Anyway, nice to see he made it through. Oh, Strider, he must be going through so much inner turmoil right now. Marefriend he loves, and one secret ruined it all.
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Oh, way more than one secret ruined that, it was gonna be over between them regardless. Plus, he doesn't really 'love' her so much as he 'really likes' her. Big difference between being caring and sensitive, and loving someone. The distance just wasn't sitting well with Rainbow Dash anymore, that's all. She was tired of being miserable while waiting for him to come and visit, despite liking him.
By the way, the errors in spelling? They aren't there in my originally written copy on my computer. Bizarre! But, fixed either way.
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Aaaand... now I feel stupid.
You fixed the mistakes though right? I am reading a different fic right now, and I don't have the patience.
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Yeah, I fixed 'em, thanks for that.
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No problem.[encouragement] Don't let up the quality, you're doing great! [/encouragement]
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Oh don't worry, I don't plan on stopping anytime soon! In fact, I'm working on a very interesting entry for Studies of a Bookworm at the moment, an entry that focuses around Luna and Celestia more than anything else. I think it's a very nifty idea!
326897 Just throwing it out there, distance isn't all that bad. It gets lonely sometimes, but it's worth it.
Holy shit Strider! Beaten physically and psychologically! When will you catch a break my friend?
Also, 2 chapters in close succession was sexy! Thanks bro.
not enough twilight this chapter to suit my taste but on the other hand; TWO CHAPTERS IN TWO DAYS!
i wonder if i could actually get some kind of overdose with negative effects and all from reading to much awesome
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Don't worry Mossflower, I got plenty of the good stuff to keep you sated 'til your next fix. How about some Studies of a Bookworm to tide you over? I got some hot stuff comin' up in that product I think you'll find very enticing.
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Personally, I think that if you look closely, Strider really gave Rainbow Dash a break on the whole scenario more than anything. He just put on a smile, listened, and let it happen while blaming himself. He let himself rage a little only after she'd left.
Well... That happened.
Well forget you're in the hospital with horrendous injuries that might cost you the job that lost you your marefriend.
You're a freakin' PEGASUS that can do MAGIC!
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Ohh, trust me, the fact that he can do magic like many, many other members of the Royal Guard isn't all that amazing. Runic Magic is actually very hazardous to one's health if over-used....namely, use it too much and you can consume so much of your soul that your body shuts down and you die.
That said, I'm sure Strider will pull through okay. As long as he can still do his job, he still has fulfillment in his life. It sucks for him that he lost his marefriend, but it was probably for the best regarding both of them: they just weren't around each other enough, what kind of relationship can come from that? He'll be happier being able to just focus on his work, and Rainbow Dash will be happier not having to think about and wish he'd come to visit more often, she can just be her own mare and do her own thing once again.
332929 Hmmm. In an Equestrian society, I can understand how difficult long distance relationships can be. I'm actually in one myself, and have been for the past 3.25 years. It's very taxing, but it's made much easier when you can talk all the time using a telephone... For us, it's worth it. Anyways, very nice chapters here. Excellent writing quality and all. I really feel bad for Twilight and Strider. And Dash, too... Really, I just feel bad for everypony. Also, on a note with the last chapter: I understand Twi's thirst for knowledge. I enjoy learning and not knowing something like that would torment me too. And... Yeah. I get the feeling that Twilight will end up going back into the forest, since Celestia won't answer her questions. Maybe ya should keep up the good work and write out the next chapters so I won't have to wonder anymore, hmmm? (Naw, take your time. I don't mind waiting.)
Ah, yes. Adding insult to literal physical injury. ...er, WHY were some readers calling him a Gary Stu again?
At any rate, I'm glad to see that my favorite OC Flyboy will be making a comeback before this story is over, even IF he has been sidelined for Faust knows how long, plus a month for physical rehabilitation.
ppor guy... I do hope for them to be together again though!
Aside from being in the hospital bed I've been there before. When my ex and I split up I was busy practically working myself to death, then I came home over the course of 3 days while she was moving out and saw my home become a shadow of it's former self... That's not easy to take when you're working 60+ hour work weeks
Jeez dash? Twist that knife enough?