Little is known about Rainbow Dash's past, but as Ponnyville's first ever rock concert hosts the performances of her favourite band the "Night Ravens," terrible events begin to unfold, showing the true horror behind Rainbow's first ever Sonic rain-boom and how Big Mac knows far more than anyother pony when concerning the Rainbow maned Filly, and he begins to notice the leaad singer of the band, "Kydo" and the drummer "Dirt" seam suspicious, and the simple earth stallion begins to worry for his friends...
Chapters (8)
Hmm...
This seems, rather intresting. I will track, for this has catched my eye
Ok I can except some typos but for you to misspell Equestria. As a brony I must say, THAT IS INEXCUSABLE! FIX IT NOW!
(I understand if you didn't pick up on that though. It will be shown as incorrect spelling but it's right, trust me.)
Along with that, you misspelled filly.
But fortunately that's all that bothers me. It's very well written, in fact its probably written in detail far better then anything I could ever write.
I shall continue reading... later. I need to get back to my own fanfic and work on the next chapter. But I like what you have so far.
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You do know that if it is complete then tracking it is pointless... right? It would make more sense to favorite this.
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my shame! 
cannot beleive that! i shall solve now!
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fogive my stupidty but I don't know how to favorite: DERP DEPR DERP
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click on the grey star net to the title. It will become yellow to show you have Favorited something
Hi!
i think it was a great story. While I only read three of your stories (this, My little dream girl and Sometimes... [which i have already commented]) I have one critique. You should avoid use numbers. Like: "and skidded the last 2 feet" in the last chapter. It doesn't bothered me in My little dream girl in car scenes. In this story it's seemed out of place. What I trying to say it is that, like this story, purely fantasy seems out of place and make a slight break in the story flown. At least in my eyes. Please take it as a constructive critique.
PS: English is my second language sorry for the mistakes.
465899 no problem
thankyou for the feedback. 
This is by far my weakest story, the idea is good, but the way i wrote it was craaaaaap! :P i had it for aaages before i became a member here, (before I started writting stories left, right and centre that is) Think my others make up for this week one.
Also, english is my first language, and you're still better at writting comments then me
It's Equestria, not aquestria. It's ALICORN, NOT ALUCORN
AHHHH IT'S CANTERLOT. C-A-N-T-E-R-L-O-T. argh can u spell
1572479 my first story I made just as I was getting into the fandom, it was crap, not even denying it. Others are far better than this!
PERV!!
No Mac it possible
Seriously no other comments
Dude if this is your worst story
I wanna see your best
Apart from a couple of interesting spelling choices, this story was simply awesome
the death of slick really hit home, great work 