After countless millennia, something has finally escaped the pits of Tartarus. It came from the deepest pits and had enough power to force its way out, leaving the Princesses to expect the worst...
They call upon the one that will return the evil to the pit, dead or alive.
Meanwhile, in Ponyville, the most generous mare has an act of kindness go terribly wrong, leaving her in debt to a creature of unmistakable supernatural power...a creature that seems to love hot coffee in the morning, naps in the afternoon, and onigiri.
Only time will tell what happens to the intertwining fates of the three players in the this cosmic comedy...
Chapters (6)
Okay... I love it. It is awesome and I hope it will be continued soon.
ooo this was actually great, i'm sad more people don't read it, well written and everything :D
but one word for ya, group, find a good group and make sure to get it in there, you'll get noticed more then
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Thank you!
What groups do you suggest joining? I'm not sure which ones would fit my writing style best.
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well i know this one fit with groups pertaining to rarity, i haven't read any of your other work so, i wouldn't know
but The Writer's Group this would be for any style
Vamponies (and other supernatural creatures)
this is more super natural, demons and such would probably work there
these two have decent base groups which would help you, but there are a thousand or more groups out there, it's not hard to find one that fits you
such as i enjoy clop fic, and clopfics also happen to be the largest group out there
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oh also you should join not only one group, spread it out, such as one group won't contain every type you enjoy to write, you have to more curtail your story to groups, such as find groups that you can post in, then join that group
also try to find others than you enjoy reading and watch them, that will get you noticed even more because people generally enjoy others that watch them, more likely they will read your story if your in the same group
More please!
I like this, let's hope that none of these old folktale ponies might think Rarity is a good snack :s
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Now why would they think that?
+2 internet points for some prediction...
Wow! More please!
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Right away, fair mare!
Give me a little to edit and then, BAM! (Bear with me, I'm weird.)
I think it's a good wake up song...
Okay so why are there deities working a resteraunt? That's one hell of a coincidence. And if this is the same Ammy I know, isn't she a sun goddess? How does she fit in a world with Celestia?
Oh shit sun it's about to go down! More please!
There's no rush take all the time you need.
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I could go into depth about the intricate relationships between the royal sisters and various deities, especially those that share the same realms (such as Apollo, Amaterasu, Celestia/ Luna, Diana, etc.), but I think it's better if they just seem neutral to one another. The way I see it is that as long as all the kids share, nothing big (like inter-god war) will happen. So, let the most conceited (definitely not Celestia) take all the credit for a job that various gods could have done. This also allows the god-characters to be more flexible in what they do. Sure, can have fun (like Inari and his unlimited sake) but still will be limited slightly (like killing mortals, taking credit, rampaging around out of boredom, blah, blah, blah) in what they do.
If you don't like the idea of them being gods (due to confliction with the royal princesses) just think of them as alicorns with lesser powers. That might explain it a little better.
And who doesn't want to work in a sushi shop? By the way, I actually modeled Amaterasu and Inari after my friend's parents. They do own a sushi shop (Fiji Grill-super tasty) and his mom always gives me and his other friends the evil eye, while his dad is super chill and likes to fool around.
If anything just call it "one hell of a coincidence."
TL;DR: Think of the gods (excluding a few) as weaker beings that the two princesses. If they have the same place in their own pantheon (sun god, moon goddess) just think of them as back-ups for when the princesses are on vacation.
Oooo, more please!
Take as long as you need I can wait.
wait why is the chap centered instead or set to the right
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Let's just say this is a "central" point in the story. (All that just for a stupid pun.)
Very interesting . . .