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Discord's reign of terror has caused many tragedies for the Apple family, until only Applejack remains in Ponyville. One night a stranger crashes into the apple orchard, and he will turn out to be the greatest tragedy for Applejack yet.
Now she's waiting. And crying.
Soarinjack with mild CheeriMac.
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I will admit I at first I didn't want to read because it had 1 like and 3 dislikes. But I am glad I decided to read it. But I did notice a run on sentence with the workman pony. I don't know if you did it on purpose or not. But good story overall.
2799960 It was purposefully run on, but I'm thinking of putting it in italics and maybe editing it around so it reads better. Thanks for your comment
Good story but try and pace it a little, don't rush towards the ending
3130468 Thanks for the advice
This probably isn't one of my best works, but I'm still glad you enjoyed it!
Soarjack is my MLP OTP, and I have to say that for a sadfic, I adore this! I've always liked the slightly dark stuff, and you do it very well, I only wish this story is that it was longer.
And as for....
Why do I feel like this was Soarin, and he;d finally been captured and enslaved and turned into a Blackhawk? I love Soarjack, but Celestia I hope that's true!
4943924 I'm glad you liked it! This was my first story on this site and I have certainly improved a lot since then, so maybe I'll write some more dark fics and more Soarinjack.
4944518
I will keep an eye out then
sorry but i will gladly sign up to kill cheerimac :(