Princess Celestia tasks the Mane Six with stopping a rogue Griffin named Vakayev from inciting a war between Equestria and the Griffin Kingdom. When one of Celestia's most trusted agents, Snow Heart, defects to General Vakayev, Celestia and Shining Armor task Snow Heart's former flight student and apprentice Thunderlane to defeat her and prevent Equestria's first full scale war.
**This story is based on Metal Gear Solid 3**
It's being written in Thunderlane's perspective for the moment.
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Like the characterizations so far, very in line with MLP:FIM's style and scripts. The set-up is good, yet doesn't really promise much as far as the premise of a war story goes. Also, there's a few sentences that could be a little more compact without losing any of their meaning or content.
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Oh don't worry, the storm is coming...
Also pretty damn good. Thunderlane is awesome, and I'm really curious to see how he'll do in a MGS3 situation.