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Luna's Apprentice

Moon Light is no ordinary pony. Her wings are different. Part of them are metal. There is one other thing. Moon Light can control magic through her eyes.

When hearing about this strange pony, Luna knows she is the perfect apprentice and hires her. Not to teach her ordinary magic. To teach her dark magic. Magic that could overthrow the sun. And Celestia.

Will Moon Light follow Luna's orders? Only Moon Light can decide that, with the help of a friend, Lightning Dust.

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thereasonwhy

thereasonwhy #1 · Jun 25th, 2013 · · · The Arrival ·

Good so far. Love the way you write. One suggestion is to give more detail to each character. Other wise keep up the good work.

Tachyon Xenophile

Tachyon Xenophile #2 · Jun 25th, 2013 · · · The Arrival ·

Alpharius IV

Alpharius IV #3 · Jun 25th, 2013 · · · The Letter ·

Evergreen? Do you mean Everfree?
I'm liking the looks of it so far, do you write it as you go, or have the story completed and release chapters when scheduled?