It is common knowledge that Spitfire is the captain of the Wonderbolts, the greatest aerial team in all of Equestria.
But what did she do before she became captain? Why, travel with the Doctor, of course!
But, with all the adventure and excitement that comes with being one of the Doctor's companions, it's nice to take a day off every once in a while and just relax. And what better way to relax with the Doctor than...with a board game?
(This is my story submission for the mistress of clop, one Twilightclopple's birthday/story swap.
It's everything you never expected. I promise.
In order to fully enjoy this story, please put on a tin-foil hat and take everything contained within as seriously as possible.
Also, no cover art, because meh.)
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Why call it clop? I saw no sex at all!
Also, I found many errors in this work. Well, one missing apostrophe and a HUGE blank space near the end, but still.
2660256 It's not clop. It's misleading! :D
Also, I the blank space was intentional. . . but I might have made it too big. I think I'll fix it.
Also, please tell me the other errors you've found. I'd like to eliminate them
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If it's not clop, why did you tag it with sex?
And for the error, where it says "broaden peoples horizons", it should have an apostrophe making the word be "people's".
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Ah, thank you. I'll fix that now.
As for the (now nonexistent) sex tag, I don't know why. I think it was left over from when I initially started this, and I forgot to change it. It's fixed now.
I feel like you copied from my story, and I don't approve. I mean, you even called her "The Mistress of Clop", which is what I called her in my description.
If it's not, then I apologize, but I'm skeptical right now. And considering I've never accused anyone else of copying off of my work, I'm fairly certain you did.
Now, onto the critique. There's a few grammatical errors, one or two spelling errors, what have you. Fixing it up would do it some good, trust me. I'm the guy who's done a rewrite of two stories, and made them better by doing it.
2662348 I purposely avoided anything related to fimfiction while writing this. As such, I have not read anything. Im sorry if they seem similar. It honestly is a huge coincidence.
And thank you for your input. Ill go back and fix them when I get the chance.
2662714 Okay, thanks for clearing that up. It's just that it seemed so similar. But you get a thumbs up from me, since that's the case.
Eep. My bad, dude. I thought your idea was original enough.
2662719 I still don't think I deserve a thumbs up. I could have done a lot better.
But thanks anyway. I'll check out your story, too! You've probably did a much better job, yo.
2663808 Meh.