Friendship is a fickle thing. It is something that can't be predicted much like love, but this isn't a love story. This is a story about how two unlikely ponies became the best of friend and then became the worst of enemies. This is how Cadence and Chrysalis first met and how though very unlikely became the best of friends. This is also about how one misunderstanding can turn a once strong friendship into mere shambles of what it once was. The story of Chrysalis and Cadence: two of the best friends there could have been, and the worst enemies that could have ever existed.
This story is really nice so far! Could use some work and revisions, but it works as of now! Good luck finishing
2685892 Thank you for your comment
Nice story you got here, let us review the one problem I found and the main thing I thought was funny
Hm... either one of the 'she wanted' s should go, or, she Really wanted to.
Says the few hundred year old.
So have a like and fav. Good day, sir.
2693580 That last one was on purpose and thanks for the like and fav
2693654 Why did this get cancelled?
5455858 I can't properly write the story. I have the story completely planned out but i just can't write it
5456920 Writer's block? Look I think it's better to write it out and then rewrite as it goes. I think you underestimate your skills.