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A thousand years before Twilight Sparkle's birth, King Sombra has conquered the Crystal Empire and enslaved its citizens. From there he turns to the land of Unicornia, only for a single unicorn princess to escape his clutches and flee for help to a tiny village called Ponyville.

In Ponyville, Minty the earth pony is living in shame after her accident at the Winter Wishes Festival a few months ago. The plight of the runaway unicorn princess gives her a chance to redeem herself, but can Minty, a pony so clumsy that she seems to destroy everything she touches, save all ponykind from Sombra's menace? Only two things are certain: Ponyville's way of life will be changed forever, and she'll never make this work without a little help.

After all... what are friends for?



Those familiar with the source material -- which is hardly a prerequisite -- will notice that some events have been moved around in time, replaced, or otherwise modified. In particular, the name 'Christmas' has been excised in favor of the winter holiday from Twinkle Wish Adventure, since ponies celebrating Christmas has never once been a thing that made sense. This story is about the characters more than about the exact events (and order of events) as depicted in the animated specials.

As for the citizens of Ponyville, only the ones who showed up in the 2003-2007 (pre-"Core 7") animated specials are counted here. Toola Roola or Princess Peppermint, to pick two random examples from later releases or the massive toyline, do not count. Gem Blossom and Valenshy are also excluded from Ponyville despite their animated appearances, on account of being "jewel ponies."

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Comments ( 24 )

A G3 story? Seriously? :facehoof:

It's actually pretty good! Can't wait for more!

Definitely sounds like G3 Original Flavor. It's weird to have ponies placed in the G4 universe, even 1,000 years ago, that have the saccharine sweet personalities that G4 ponies already have turned up to eleven. Interested to see how this ties into FiM aside from King Sombra. I can already see some hints of Celestia and Luna as well as the Elements of Harmony in there.

I grew up watching G2 and G3 and you got everyponies personality spot on!:pinkiehappy:

Off to a great start, and I eagerly look forward to the next update! :pinkiehappy:

One end was nestled in the sun, and the other in the moon, and now the sun and the moon keep the First Rainbow to themselves

Hmmm... Elements of Harmony origin story? :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:

How are you SO accurate with this stuff? I watched G3 all my Childhood (Some G2) And I know everypony inside-out so it's astounding how accurate this is.

I love the way you tie all this stuff into G4. Mmmm, that's some sweet worldbuilding. :rainbowkiss:

2669486 Research!
Every episode ever aired
Nearly complete transcripts for the same, for quicker reference
Full animated cast
Oodles of specific information across the generations
Besides that, just a lot of rewatching/rereading individual characters' scenes until they begin to make sense and I can hear their voice actresses in my head. Additionally, nearly all the major G3 ponies have specific verbal tics/catchphrases, which go a long way on their own to making the characters sound authentic, but more importantly, provide a good jumping off point for figuring out why they talk that way, what they think about, etc.

I love how you integrate the various generations! Also nice introduction of Trixie's ancestor, Trixiebell. :trixieshiftright:

Poor Wysteria, stuck alone with an all-too-proper dragon! (Nice Winnie-ther-Pooh reference, BTW.)

I can't wait for more!

As a fellow G3-G4 writer, I highly, highly, highly approve :pinkiehappy:

This is off to a good start, I'll be following it!

And don't overlook this: A Very Minty Summer Sun Celebration

Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.

2958781 I've had a story on Equestria Daily before, I know the basic steps. :) I rather suspect this is too narrowly G3 focused to get on, though. It's clearly setting up a G4 backstory in various ways, but the EQD admins are, if anything, proud of knowing nothing about the past generations, let alone anything about the current generation besides (select details of) the TV show itself.

2958976 You should do it anyway! You never know until you try. By the way, what's your other story that's on Equestria Daily?

Just so you know, I prefer this story over the entire Pony POV Series. ...I know I can't take that back, but I'm sticking to it!

A cute pony is not what I think when I think Piccolo.

3565229 Aww, that's sweet. :) Of course, they're very different kinds of stories, so I'd hesitate to make any kind of direct comparison. Still, I do keep meaning to get back to this... maybe Piccolo can help do some setup:
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So how soon until the next chapter comes out?

I never expected to find myself reading G3 fimfiction but I'm really enjoying it. Now I just want more :pinkiehappy:

I love this story, its one of the most detailed and complex story i've ever seen. That adds to the plot, and shows us diffrent perspectives of characters. I've never known pinkie could have been such a jerk and a perfectonist. Anyways its 10/10 for me. :pinkiehappy:

Are you going to finish A Very Minty Hearth's Warming Eve? I love that story, what you have so far is awesome!

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