I'm a bisexual atheist from texas suffering from how lame life is and how awesome I am in comparison. (that's a joke...you can laugh now...)
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This... Is actually an interesting concept. The writing's a little clumsy, but you're handling this very well.
Favourited for potential.
2629452 Thank you
2629497 I do legitimately think there's a good bit of potential here. There aren't a lot of fics that focus on these sort of issues, and the ones that do mention them are 99% red and black OC alicorns with dark pasts.
I'd advise, personally, that you submit this to W.R.I.T.E.. The folk there can give you some good pointers!
2629585 I'll look into the group and ask them to review it. I appreciate it.
2629590 Great! Always glad to help someone improve.
Nice chapter. I feel really bad for Cherry for what she went though. Please keep up the amazing work.
2749310 Thanks, I'm going to be adding a chapter roughly every 2 weeks.
2750803 Thats good know. Please keep up the amazing work.
Nice Chapter. More I read this story more I feel bad about her.
2863096 I know sometimes I have trouble writing it because it makes me feel weird and thanks. It gets more interesting later on as she reveals more about herself and as we learn more about the other ponies there
2865191 I don't blame you. I probably feel same way if I was writing this.