Tiny Equine in Everfree

by KuroiTsubasaTenshi

Page 73

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Comments

[Regidar]

This story is swank as fuck

[Skeeter The Lurker]

I'm going to fave and upvote for the concept alone.

Fucking brilliant.

~Skeeter The Lurker

[JapaneseTeeth]

This is hilarious.

[Posey]

I giggled like a schoolgirl...

I expect you'll be a gentleman and pay for my smile reduction surgery?

~ Love, Posey

[Sereg]

Glad to see it up so I can experience it in its full glory. Also appreciate the other "translations" you added.

And waiting for Space Monkey Farming in Former Unicornia.

[Regidar]

2737072 yeah, I got that, but still... what the fuck, actually.

[Connelly]

What are these? Tears? From laughing? Yes they are!

[KuroiTsubasaTenshi]

2734997>>2734851>>2735347>>2737302>>2737341

My work here is done.

2736214

Aw, don'tcha like smiles? You could charm so many Pinkies ponies.

2737176

Hehe, I'll see what I can do.

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[EZTP]

You got some chops to pull this off, takes me back to my goosebumps days! Well done laddie

[PresentPerfect]

>THIS STORY

[recentteen14]

Oh god... Love how theres 3 random chapters just for people cheating their way through :P
Very nicely done choose your own adventure fic. Was fun.

[Nostalgia Schmaltz]

inb4 flood of EQD comments

[Twifight Sparkill]

Choose your own adventures!? HOORAY!

... wait, why am I thinking about Dungeons and Dragons right now?

Oh right, I'm a humongous nerd!

[richfiles]

Yay! I use my ninja ways to rob a bank when the markets crash, taking Prince Horseplace's investments! I'm a ninja criminal! VICTORY!!!

[richfiles]

Now publish a series of chapters detailing each of the mane 6's path, and whether they BAD END or VICTORY!
And of course their individual thoughts on the story! lel

[Georg]

Help, I is trapped in a maze of twisty passages, all different, and Froboz map not any good. Send cookies.

[DannyJ]

Well, it's no Brony Hero of Equestria, but... damn. As someone who tried and failed to make a CYOA before, I know how difficult it must have been to get this all right. The fact that you did it at all is commendable. Not really sure if I find the "translation" gags funny though. They were just... strange, really.

[Zafur]

Well, that was fun! Somehow I missed 6/73 even with trying to click everything so whoops, had to cheat haha.

[cleverpun]

Congrats on the EqD feature Judging by the abundance of prereader quotes, they had a lot of fun with it

[nanorider426]

Brilliant!

[KuroiTsubasaTenshi]

3552529
You already found the way in.

[KittyGoesInsane]

This story was awesome :D now I want more stories like this

[Aequorie]

i.imgur.com/o6eFnWf.png

[PaxMano33]

3607640 fuck wat is this? is this a flowchart of the story?

[Aequorie]

3757500 yes. but it was generated automatically, so it might not be completely accurate.

[KuroiTsubasaTenshi]

3798759
Doesn't make it any less awesome.

[Treble_Sketch]

I'm the 126th like

[Spectrumancer]

Well that was hilarifuntacious.

[Winter_Solstice]

Am making the smile face as I read and having the good feelings. Also, am adding to Tag-A-Long's Book Club and ribbon giving:

i.imgur.com/BF6x9JM.png

[KuroiTsubasaTenshi]

5710522
I am having the gladness of your appreciation award. The thankings you are given.

[PaulAsaran]

You can has review!