Harmony is gone.
A world is in flames and ruin.
And a human wakes up in a hospital bed.
Thus begins the Ballad.
A human with strange new limbs and senses awakens to an even stranger world that has suffered a terrible apocalypse.
He remembers nothing save for his name.
And the only things directing him.....are the letters left behind.
Now he must find the one who brought him to this world and find out why he is so important here.
He must find Harmony.
And put back the order of the world.
A big thanks to Angles for pre-reading the story.
Chapters (5)
Oh......my God....
Right off the bat I am rendered speechless....
This is going to be very big isn't it?
Man...........I don't think I have ever read anything with so much emotion in it. I loved it.........I actually loved it. It left me speechless and just.....in awe.
This is beyond good E.
I am really looking forward to this story.
And I mean that
Damn
I don't know what to say!
That was freaking excellent. Everything just went together.
Favorite story ever
This was fun to help with.
not bad second chapters start was a little slow but not bad at all I will have to keep up with this story
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I really appreciate all you have done for this story Angels.
Thanks a ton man.
i dont know what i just experienced but it was so good.
Human to pony story..... aaaaaaaaaand I'm outta here
Dat Shit Was Awesome.
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-_-
And just where in the name of mike did I say this was a human turning into a pony story?
this is a great story so far. i have not had a story cause me to cry (if only in my mind) to a story in such a long time, and i cannot wait to see how this all ends.
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Well then i promise you by the time this is over I will make you legitimately cry
I just 're-read the chapter. I cried about three tears. But I still cried. I hate that over the years I have grown numb slowly but surely, to sadness and the like, and I hate it, but I look through countless stories trying to find on to make me cry for real. Once I cried over a SIM In sims 3 because I felt an emotional connection to it. That twas when my tears flowed free,... indeed when they flowed free.... I wait to see if this story will truly make me cry. Do not disappoint.. Audiu for row Mister E.
O_O I just realised your the author of our guardian enigma. Dejavu. I have seen and read both your story's. You are truly a very eccentric mister E.
I end my point with a simple statement ... DAKKA DAKKA DAKKA I cede my point.
Do you need an editor?
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I actually already have one. Why do you ask such question?
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Yeah, why would you ask?
2820674 Well, it's because, I didn't bother to look under the 'more' button an.d I thought, your story was a great one with little or no grammar mistake, so I thought that I could edit your story.
Well, one point for creativity.
And another for,SPAAAACCE
As you could see, this is fantasy and not real.
I mean, how can a fly get out using a window?
It's irrationalabble
I loved it...
It made me laugh at those grimdark stories I made in my mind.
Hehehehehehe... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
So... I'm editing my comment
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Shhhhh.....spoilers
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Okay
Who are you killing anyways?
The music really suits this opening, well done.
If I might ask, what purpose does revealing T's identity serve in this chapter, rather than in the first letter or when they meet face to face (assuming they meet)?
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Well there are several reasons why. The first is she needed Elijah to trust her and knowing he would have no choice to follow the letters, she revealed herself in the last one she left to fully gain that trust as a way of rewarding him for following the letters. Also when readers see the letter "T" they might think it was Twilight and get upset that I am using an overused character to direct the protagonist but are then surprised to find that its Trixie and rather than meet her in the library or outside of town, we have to go and search for her.
But I never said whether we would really find her alive or not.....
You just made this story 20% less likely to make me cry by makin it fighty...
Good luck making me cry now.
I love this fic so fucking much it hurts. MOAR UPDATES, PLEASE?!
Gah dammit. You sly ass. You changed it and I almost cried.
gaar
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wait
cried from what?
is it still bad?
3549408 Hmm, key words... *You sly ass* guess.
3549408 Aka, I cried one tear, maybe. Poor Applebloom. T_T
Lovely. Absolutely lovely.
I got shivers.
Update?
Update
OOOOHHH!!!
Dead i presume?
I think it is
idk when this was Published But it's toooooo good