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Well, I can't fault your title.
It's a good one in proess. I am terrible at spelling and grammar but can berlie notice when its wrong in stories. This one i can. It can be better but i love the concept of derpy.
214615 lol nice
A editing tip that I often use is to go to Microsoft word and use that. Just copy and paste, then hit spell check. It should help you with most of your spelling and grammar. Just be careful for when it hits pony stuff. Go through each mistake individually. Sometimes it's best leaving stuff unchanged.
214689 yea that is what i do still doesn't always come out right
I like the story, but there are a lot of grammatical errors, proofread it and get a friend to do it too, then you'll be set
214696 then read carefully through your story. Imagine that someone is actually telling the story and you have to write his lines. You don't want it to sound like he's reading a typewriter, you must make it so that the sentences flow. One sentence leads to another and another until you get past the point you were trying to give. Then make a new paragraph and start the procedure all over again. And if you can't think of anything to add to it to make if flow, then add in some detail. Describe feeling, images, ponies, and other stuff. I'm sure that if you think hard enough then you can do it.
i most likely will not finish this soon i need to prepare and what not for this competition